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Re: Writings by Belgianboy
« Reply #10 on: August 17, 2006, 03:16:50 am »
Hi Lucise--

Glad to hear you've been enjoying Reunion. :) Yes, the FanFiction.Net version has had some of that lovely filth edited out. In fact, it has one less chapter than the LJ version; it's where Ennis shares with Jack a special sexual practice  :o that has helped him survive the four years on his own. In FF (I think it's Chapter 8 or 9, thereabouts), it becomes the brief scene where Ennis fucks Jack but pulls out and comes on his face. :P Otherwise, I believe the Reunion editing mostly has to do with how graphically certain body parts and fluids are described. If you happen to read both versions, I'd be interested in your opinion of how they compare. But no obligation to comment at all ... I'm just curious to see if the FF version loses anything that an LJ reader might find essential.

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Re: Writings by Belgianboy
« Reply #11 on: August 17, 2006, 11:43:16 am »
Hey BB ~

I will sacrifice myself and read the LJ version of Reunion as well.. ah, the pain .. ;D ;)
I will definitely come back here and post what I think when I am done reading it!

Thanks again.  Hope you keep writing!  :)
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Re: Writings by Belgianboy
« Reply #12 on: August 18, 2006, 12:39:43 am »
Quote from: belgianboy on August 17, 2006, 03:16:50 am
Hi Lucise--

Glad to hear you've been enjoying Reunion. :) Yes, the FanFiction.Net version has had some of that lovely filth edited out. In fact, it has one less chapter than the LJ version; it's where Ennis shares with Jack a special sexual practice  :o that has helped him survive the four years on his own. In FF (I think it's Chapter 8 or 9, thereabouts), it becomes the brief scene where Ennis fucks Jack but pulls out and comes on his face. :P Otherwise, I believe the Reunion editing mostly has to do with how graphically certain body parts and fluids are described. If you happen to read both versions, I'd be interested in your opinion of how they compare. But no obligation to comment at all ... I'm just curious to see if the FF version loses anything that an LJ reader might find essential.

Belgianboy

BelgianBoy, I love both versions, but I prefer the unrated LJ, version, the one including the sexual practice you mentioned.  I have never read anything so inventive - it is so deliciously smutty!  ::) Actually, this is not smut, IMO.  I think your description of the act is very tastefully done.  Just a great story, wonderful! ;)
« Last Edit: August 18, 2006, 12:41:29 am by littlewing1957 »
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Re: Writings by Belgianboy
« Reply #13 on: August 20, 2006, 11:28:58 am »
Have only watched the fullscreen, have not yet opened the widescreern version. Don't think I'll bother with ff.

(I'm really very articulate; I just don't choose to be here.)
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Re: Writings by Belgianboy
« Reply #14 on: August 23, 2006, 05:55:07 pm »
Belgianboy--you hasvr som LPS hidden under something--I can't find it. LINK?
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Re: Writings by Belgianboy
« Reply #15 on: August 24, 2006, 12:27:43 am »
By LPS do you mean RPS? If that's what you're looking for, here's the link to my LiveJournal:

http://belgianboy.livejournal.com/6583.html#cutid1

It's not what you're used to getting from me (well, it actually is, in a different way), but I've got some nice 'n hot RPS in the works! Might have to do another J&E piece first, though. :)

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Re: Writings by Belgianboy
« Reply #16 on: August 24, 2006, 06:12:33 pm »
I saw that one. The one I was looking for (yes, Rps. not Lps) was BEHIND one of your
J and E ones and it was abiout J and H, and it was--just l;ike the J and E ones...must be some other fellow. You know, they layer these thiungs, so th4 space behind you may be occupied by...anybody...odd thing was, it6 sounded like your writing...you knoiw, hot as hell. It seemed NOT to be the first in the series...


Oh well, we brake for hallucinations..
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Re: Writings by Belgianboy
« Reply #17 on: August 24, 2006, 11:11:51 pm »
?????

I'm afraid I wasn't aware of this "layering," and I don't understand what it is. I don't believe I have written any J/H RPS yet, certainly not in the style to which I am accustomed! I do know there is a lot of HOT J/H stuff out there---it's obvious many writers find it more interesting or exciting to project the love lives of the two stars than of the already fictional characters.

Hope you find what it is you're looking for. And if someone is hiding "behind" me, I'm intrigued ...

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Re: Writings by Belgianboy
« Reply #18 on: August 25, 2006, 12:41:13 pm »
Quote from: belgianboy on August 24, 2006, 11:11:51 pm
?????

I'm afraid I wasn't aware of this "layering," and I don't understand what it is.

Hope you find what it is you're looking for. And if someone is hiding "behind" me, I'm intrigued ...

Belgianboy

Hey Belgianboy,

I know what Twistedude is trying to say, and I don't have a full understanding of it either, but from what I have gathered so far, it seems that if you go to a specific fangroup in Live Journal (like say Wranglers, or BBMslash)  and then you use the left and right arrows at the top of each post to get to the ajacent post, it is as though you are scrolling through the whole Wrangler's site chronoligically, so whichever Wrangler member posted after you that day, etc etc, their post(s) will follow yours.

It's like all the Wranglers' posts are strung togther in date order, and just use the right arrow to go to the next post and the next, and the next.

I know that's a pretty obscure explanation, but hey, what can ya say?

Except maybe:  write more J & E, Belgianboy?? ;) :D   hunh?  Pretty please? :-* :-*

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Re: Writings by Belgianboy
« Reply #19 on: August 25, 2006, 04:18:59 pm »
Jake Twist: "His brain liquifying..."  gee, I'd been wondering what was leasking out of my ears lately...

What you sort of described is one of the few advantages fanfiction.ret has over LiveJouirnal: your site is ALL yours, and nothing is behind any story you post. You can also see the number of "hits" your stories get (Means someone punched up your story--does NOT mean they finished it...), how many reviews, who's favorite you are, who has you down for "alert" if you post a new story, how many words in each story..etc. Hey--that's quite a lot...ALSO: if you click on "C2," and then on "Brokeback Mountain," youi can get two lists: one, of all the stories published about BBM, and one of "only the best"--T, K-T, M, with a total of about 35...course, that's just one person 's opinion, but I find many--though not all of--my favorite stories listed there.
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