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Offline Impish

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Re: Favorite Ennis del Mar line
« Reply #20 on: April 11, 2006, 07:15:31 pm »
There is one line from Ennis in the book that didn't make it to the screenplay, and it is the only change that I wish  hadn't happened.

During The Big Kiss after 4 years, Ennis whispers in Jack's ear:  Little Darlin'

Oh I miss this line!  To me, it reveals that Ennis' heart is involved and that the kiss isn't only about having a woodie.  And think about what it would have meant to Jack!  He arrives not knowing exactly what reaction he'll get from Ennis.  The kiss goes a long way to relieve any anxiety he may have had, but it I had been Jack and heard "Little Darlin' " in my ear, I would have dissolved right then and there into the cement sidewalk!   :P
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Re: Favorite Ennis del Mar line
« Reply #21 on: April 12, 2006, 03:58:58 pm »
Impish, that';s not fair...I think it's all right to vote for lines IN THE MOVIE that aren';t on the list (I did), but--we ALL miss a LOT of lines from the short story--and they just ain't there...
Gosh, what Ledger could have done with that line..he could have gotten the horses and his kids and Jack all into the same two words..he can do ANYTHING...

To make it fit with Movie Ennis, it wouldn't be your normal term of endearment line..remember,  he..doesn't have any...(b'lieve they call that Tragedy).

Damn...forever damn.
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Re: Favorite Ennis del Mar line
« Reply #22 on: April 12, 2006, 06:48:27 pm »
Impish, that';s not fair...I think it's all right to vote for lines IN THE MOVIE that aren';t on the list (I did), but--we ALL miss a LOT of lines from the short story--and they just ain't there...

No worries; that wasn't my vote (I voted for a line in the list above).  I just mentioned it in this thread about lines from Ennis.

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Gosh, what Ledger could have done with that line..he could have gotten the horses and his kids and Jack all into the same two words..he can do ANYTHING...

Exactly!    If we had seen Ennis call one of his kids "Little Darlin'" -- or to Alma, or a much-loved horse as Annie says he does -- then it would have had all that much more impact when we hear it said in Jack's ear.   Not being a man of words, it's the only term of endearment in Ennis' repertoire.  Why wasn't that included?
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Re: Favorite Ennis del Mar line
« Reply #23 on: April 16, 2006, 02:10:32 pm »
I voted for "sending up a prayer of thanks." So touching, then so funny.
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Re: Favorite Ennis del Mar line
« Reply #24 on: April 18, 2006, 03:18:15 am »
I voted for "sending up a prayer of thanks." So touching, then so funny.

That one is my favorite too...I think it's one of (the only?) time we see Ennis happy and completely at peace.  I think he's saying something about the importance of gratitude, but I tend to over-analyze  :)  I also love 'There ain't no reins on this one.' from the same scene.

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Re: Favorite Ennis del Mar line
« Reply #25 on: April 19, 2006, 12:55:40 am »
None of these were my favorite line from Ennis, but I chose the Jack F*ckin' Twist line. I think my true favorite line was the one where he warns Jack about "this thing between us, grabs hold of us...and we're both dead." It's not the exact quote...but I love hearing him say it.
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Re: Favorite Ennis del Mar line
« Reply #26 on: April 21, 2006, 02:16:29 pm »
Hands down, "Jack fuckin' Twist." When Ennis steps out on the landing, looks down at Jack, and utters that line, I swear he's the happiest we ever see him!
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Re: Favorite Ennis del Mar line
« Reply #27 on: April 29, 2006, 07:05:59 pm »
The only things that Ennis Del Mar said to Jack Twist before Alma opened the door the 2nd time in 1967 in the book were "son of a bitch" and "little darlin." And, in the book, Jack ran up the stairs, two at a time, to the landing where Ennis was standing. Both of them said, "son of a bitch;" but, I don't think that they were calling each other that, they were just excited to see each other and were at a loss for words. IMO, "son of a bitch" could be interpreted as "Boy howdy! I never thought I would see you again and I sure am too excited to think of something else to say!"

While a modern Ennis might have used the "F-ing" word in talking to a friend he had not seen in several years, back in 1967, the country guys that I was around would have only used the "F-ing" word as the middle or first name of someone they hated with a passion.

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Re: Favorite Ennis del Mar line
« Reply #28 on: May 08, 2006, 08:51:21 pm »
Voted for the harmonica line, I just love it and Jack laughs and Ennis smiles. *sighs*
My favorite isn't there:

"There ain't no reins on this one."
  I agree with you on this one too Impish!!  It's not fair to vote for only one.

I also liked "Thats the most I've spoke in a year."
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Re: Favorite Ennis del Mar line
« Reply #29 on: May 16, 2006, 04:23:29 pm »
Has to be

"Jack, I swear..."

Just devastating.