Author Topic: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl  (Read 142450 times)

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #410 on: November 03, 2006, 05:30:54 pm »
Helen, you're right to be confused about Alma.  On the one hand, she saw something that Ennis cannot explain away and she's heartbroken.  On the other hand, things were not resolved completely between Ennis and Alma.  It's all a confusing mess, just like everything else in Ennis's life at the moment.  When Jack says Ennis will never be happy with her, he's responding to Ennis's not knowing whether he wants to step back into that life.

As for the line about the U.S. Attorney...yeah, that's a hint.  But probably no one will ever get it, it's pretty obscure.  It will all become clear later.  It's just setting up something.  God...I feel like such a dork with all these "clues." 

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #411 on: November 03, 2006, 05:42:44 pm »
after all, Ennis was squeezing Jack's nipples when Alma came in.  He wasn't helping him with his lactation problem!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #412 on: November 03, 2006, 05:44:35 pm »

Yay! I love that ending...

June did you see the pic I put of Jake as SOG Jack over in my thread? You asked me if I had anymore so I posted it over there for some strange reason....

Oh fuck Mandy ~ I think I just died. Jesus. I want that one as an avatar!! Desperately  ::) It's too gorgeous

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #413 on: November 03, 2006, 05:45:57 pm »
I made an avatar for it on my LJ, you're welcome to take it  ;D
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #414 on: November 03, 2006, 05:51:23 pm »
Oh fuck Mandy ~ I think I just died. Jesus. I want that one as an avatar!! Desperately  ::) It's too gorgeous

Wait..where's this picture??

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #415 on: November 03, 2006, 06:07:03 pm »
Here you go!




this is what I think of everytime you mention Jack and his leather jacket (even though the jaket in the story is black...)  ::)
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #416 on: November 03, 2006, 06:15:33 pm »
Here you go!




this is what I think of everytime you mention Jack and his leather jacket (even though the jaket in the story is black...)  ::)

*thud*

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #417 on: November 03, 2006, 06:18:26 pm »
OMG!

That is SOG Jack.

It is, isn't it?

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #418 on: November 03, 2006, 06:19:53 pm »
*thud*

LOL that's the same reaction I had  ;)
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #419 on: November 03, 2006, 06:33:18 pm »
I made an avatar for it on my LJ, you're welcome to take it  ;D

Really??

SQUEEEEEE!!!

Awww, thank you Mandy!  :-*