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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #680 on: November 16, 2006, 09:49:00 am »
I know it's already been said, but... Happy Thursday  ;D
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

-- del Mar Painting, Ch. 48 by b73

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #681 on: November 16, 2006, 10:02:37 am »

Let's all sit in a circle holding hands summoning the next chapter.

Karen

Good idea!  :D

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #682 on: November 16, 2006, 10:03:31 am »
I know it's already been said, but... Happy Thursday  ;D

Hi Mandy!  ;D

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #683 on: November 16, 2006, 10:04:52 am »
I know it's already been said, but... Happy Thursday  ;D

Hi Mandy! Hi everybody... Donderdag yeeeeeh!  ;D

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #684 on: November 16, 2006, 10:14:30 am »
Hi Mandy! Hi everybody... Donderdag yeeeeeh!  ;D

Hey Mel!  :)

Ben je er klaar voor??  ;D

Did you have a nice B'day?

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #685 on: November 16, 2006, 12:21:25 pm »
Hey, guys.  Chapter 13 is up at http://midwest-girl.livejournal.com/7400.html   Thanks!  ;)

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #686 on: November 16, 2006, 12:37:03 pm »
Hey Mel!  :)

Ben je er klaar voor??  ;D

Did you have a nice B'day?

Ready! Ja, I did have a wonderful b'day, thank you!  :-*

Oh, can't wait to get home!

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #687 on: November 16, 2006, 12:49:34 pm »
Vague spoilers, sort of.....





**Reads chapter 13 **

**Screams**

Awesome chapter. The relationship between Hinestroza and Jack.... and then later Jack and Ennis, described so well it all sendt shivers down my spine.

Now this chapter's turn of events I *so* didn't see coming!  :o :o  I thought they'd be captured or found by Madrigal and that would be Jack's hour to sacrifice himself in order to seek redemption for Ortiz.

I think that based on experience from investigations and other prosecutions Ennis probably should have been entirely aware just where this particular case was heading, well before the prosecutor told him, but of course he's been more than distracted lately.......  Anyway, who cares?!?! "What happens now" is the only question!

** Starts biting nails like crazy **
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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #688 on: November 16, 2006, 12:50:59 pm »
Hey, guys.  Chapter 13 is up at http://midwest-girl.livejournal.com/7400.html   Thanks!  ;)

Okay.... Well... What to say...

Another fantastic chapter.

Am a bit numb. Not the direction I was expecting. Amy you have just ratcheted up the tension several more notches!

I do not know how I am going to hang on for a week for the next one.

Will wait to discuss plot till you SOG fans have read it.

Karen

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #689 on: November 16, 2006, 01:02:52 pm »

I think that based on experience from investigations and other prosecutions Ennis probably should have been entirely aware just where this particular case was heading, well before the prosecutor told him, but of course he's been more than distracted lately.......  Anyway, who cares?!?!

** Starts biting nails like crazy **

Actually, the WPP is handled exclusively by the U.S. Attorney's Office and the U.S. Marshal's Office, so Ennis wouldn't necessarily be in the loop of what was going on with Jack's status.  He would be informed on a need to know basis.  I do agree that he probably should have been more concerned w/ getting Hinestroza into the country, but I found that often times the different divisions of a prosecution fail to communicate with one another on any substantive level.  The FBI is left to handle their part of the case and the U.S. Attorney's office, etc. handles their part and you hope all the pieces come together in the end.  Also, Ennis, up until this point, was a big believer in "the system" and thought things would work out because that was what was supposed to happen.