Author Topic: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl  (Read 219070 times)

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #780 on: November 24, 2006, 12:06:10 pm »
Very intense chapter. As I said in my LJ response, speechless again. Maybe when I'm coherent I can write more.

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #781 on: November 24, 2006, 03:55:28 pm »
Wonderful chapter, kept me on the edge of my seat again! Nothing more coherent coming out of me right now...

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #782 on: November 25, 2006, 09:27:56 pm »
FINALLY got a chance to read the update... and wow.

I have nothing good to say, but that was absolutely perfect.
‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #783 on: November 26, 2006, 03:06:45 am »


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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #784 on: November 26, 2006, 03:08:14 am »
But here Ennis was, having barely spoken five words to Dane Gentry, and already he hated his guts.  . . . . The man was just what Ennis had expected. Tough, cocky, over-confident.  His attitude worked well with his handsome face, although it pained Ennis to acknowledge it. His thick brown hair covered one leafy green eye, the muscles in his arms flexing as he reached for a cigarette, his mouth full like Jack’s but not as soft. . . .  Dane gave Ennis a half-smile around his cigarette, flicking the hair from his eye with a practiced toss of his head. – “Shades of Grey” by midwest_girl/Amy


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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #785 on: November 26, 2006, 03:45:32 am »



Oh SUCH!!

WHERE did you get these photos?  :D

I love it!  :)
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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #786 on: November 26, 2006, 03:47:58 am »
But here Ennis was, having barely spoken five words to Dane Gentry, and already he hated his guts.  . . . . The man was just what Ennis had expected. Tough, cocky, over-confident.  His attitude worked well with his handsome face, although it pained Ennis to acknowledge it. His thick brown hair covered one leafy green eye, the muscles in his arms flexing as he reached for a cigarette, his mouth full like Jack’s but not as soft. . . .  Dane gave Ennis a half-smile around his cigarette, flicking the hair from his eye with a practiced toss of his head. – “Shades of Grey” by midwest_girl/Amy



Whew child.... here's another one!   8)

Keep 'em coming!  :)
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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #787 on: November 26, 2006, 03:57:11 am »
Wonderful chapter, kept me on the edge of my seat again! Nothing more coherent coming out of me right now...

Yes! It truly was a remarkable chapter Amy! I loved it!  :D

Thank you once again for sharing your wonderful story with all of us!

i can't wait for chapter 15 now!!  :)
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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #788 on: November 26, 2006, 07:22:54 am »
Loving all your pics, as always Leslie  :)

Jesus, that one of Jake in the towel has been a favourite of mine for AGES.

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Re: Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl
« Reply #789 on: November 26, 2006, 07:28:48 am »
Jake SMOKES? :o

And not in a good way?

Oh no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!