Shades of Grey by Midwest-girl

[mvansand76]

lmao me,vans

yeah they matter!!

thing is you don't have penises and all that macho stuf we tend to treasure so much, so when a woman does a better job then a man does while  she is writing about 2 men....and it's so real you can taste it??? And the MEN fell flat on their faces trying to do the same thing???

that is something any guy would notice!!!!

sort of like AP writing about J&E up on Brokeback...

  Yeah, we notice it too, it's a mystery how women seem to be able to write about it much better than men! 

[midwest-girl]

And compliments from us girls don't matter?

 

 

NO!  Compliments from you girls mean the world to me!  I just meant that it's nice to know that the men who are reading *believe* this Jack and Ennis because they approach the story from a completely different perspective and it's important to me that these men I'm writing about are really men.  Does that make sense?

[midwest-girl]

Yeah, we notice it too, it's a mystery how women seem to be able to write about it much better than men! 

I always think that about Larry McMurtry's books, he writes women better than any woman I've ever read.

[brokebackjack]

yeah he does! the whole question is interesting, re men writing women and women writing men.

But i have to reiterate, when it comes to fanfic some pretty good stories are marred, and  not ENHANCED by throbbing manly members, ejaculating copious amounts of sperm  every 5 minutes while the men in question squeal Oh I love you love you love you! YOU GIRLS try to yell out c oherent sentences at the point of orgasm, most guys manage  something sounding like gdooosh
lol
lol
lol

Except for one guy i knew. raging italian heterosexual godlet with muscles and extreme narcissistic self love, should have been a serial killer. He used to yell, Oh ***** you look so GOOD!!!  Called out his own name. I'm serious. Did it with distressing regularity. Used to do weight curls and kiss his biceps, too, and had mirrors everywhere so--as he put it--I can see the best looking human within 20 miles. ie, him.

lol

all his G/F's left

[coffeecat33]

"Gdooosh" is exactly what Ennis said in the FNIT scene.

[brokebackjack]

he did?

I will have to listen again. usually i have the volume up high so I can hear jack say oh please fuck me ennis

[Bigheart]

YOU GIRLS try to yell out c oherent sentences at the point of orgasm,

Hmmmm, well, I beg to differ but that's all I'm saying!! 

 

 

[coffeecat33]

OT - okay, okay, okay I know. Christian Bale has already been cast as Dane.
He's too old for the part, but Clive Owen does have lovely green eyes!

[coffeecat33]

And he's on the cover of USA Weekend. I won't put any more Clive on the Shades of Grey site, but if anyone wants more of him, his website is www.cliveowenspeaks.com. His chest has its own page.

[brokebackjack]

he's not THAT goodlookin...