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Offline jpwagoneer1964

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SHIRTS, SUITS AND SILVER MEANS 25
« on: October 04, 2006, 11:34:24 am »
Just posted this story part one of one of the adventures of Jack and Ennis. Hope you enjoy. Will be three or four parts.


SHIRTS, SUITS AND SLIVER MEANS 25

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3183193/1/
« Last Edit: December 17, 2006, 02:24:25 pm by jpwagoneer1964 »
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Re: SHIRTS, SUITS AND SILVER MEANS 25
« Reply #1 on: October 09, 2006, 02:06:25 am »
This is just beautiful.  As always, a wholesome, touching, romantic read.   :) I'm crying! 

I won't go into detail and spoil it for those who haven't read the story yet, but I can't wait to see what happens at the "celebration."    ::) Please hurry with chapter 2.  And thanks for continuing to write for us!   ;)
« Last Edit: October 10, 2006, 06:46:55 pm by littlewing1957 »
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Re: SHIRTS, SUITS AND SILVER MEANS 25
« Reply #2 on: October 16, 2006, 06:04:27 pm »
Jest posted chapter 2 of 'SHIRTS, SUITS AND SILVER MEANS 25'. Hope you enjoy.

Mark
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Re: SHIRTS, SUITS AND SILVER MEANS 25
« Reply #3 on: October 16, 2006, 06:33:04 pm »
Mark,

This link:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3183193/2/

which should be chapter 2, seems to be the same story as in chapter 1. Not sure what the problem is but I think it needs a fix...?

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Re: SHIRTS, SUITS AND SILVER MEANS 25
« Reply #4 on: October 16, 2006, 07:30:56 pm »
Hi Leslie

Thanks I got it fixed. Chapter two is correct.

Mark
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Re: SHIRTS, SUITS AND SILVER MEANS 25
« Reply #5 on: October 16, 2006, 08:40:08 pm »
Quote from: jpwagoneer1964 on October 16, 2006, 07:30:56 pm
Hi Leslie

Thanks I got it fixed. Chapter wo is correct.

Mark

And here is the link:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3183193/2/

A very enjoyable shopping expedition at the Cherry Creek Mall, a place I have been...and to the movies there, too!

Enjoy, everyone.

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Re: SHIRTS, SUITS AND SILVER MEANS 25
« Reply #6 on: October 16, 2006, 11:22:32 pm »
Chapter 2 is amazing!  You have brought a long held fantasy to life for me!  I can't wait to read what happens next!  :)
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Re: SHIRTS, SUITS AND SILVER MEANS 25
« Reply #7 on: October 17, 2006, 04:25:55 pm »
Added just a bit on their trip home today. Can't resist a road trip
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Re: SHIRTS, SUITS AND SILVER MEANS 25
« Reply #8 on: October 19, 2006, 09:41:10 pm »
The road trip addition is just perfect.  You have a real sense of how E&J might interact, if they were allowed to be together.  Your depiction of Jack - a man so confident of Ennis' love - is aware that he can get Ennis to do his bidding, get his way just by turning on the Ole Jack charm is spot on!   ::) I can't wait to read what happens next. 
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Re: SHIRTS, SUITS AND SILVER MEANS 25
« Reply #9 on: November 15, 2006, 06:46:14 pm »
Quote from: littlewing1957 on October 19, 2006, 09:41:10 pm
The road trip addition is just perfect.  You have a real sense of how E&J might interact, if they were allowed to be together.  Your depiction of Jack - a man so confident of Ennis' love - is aware that he can get Ennis to do his bidding, get his way just by turning on the Ole Jack charm is spot on!   ::) I can't wait to read what happens next. 
                                                                                                                                                    i really like this story..your jack and ennis are so canon, as you would imagine them after twenty five years...ennis still shy, but being led by jack to do what he wants to do anyway..  i loved the part about ennis keeping the job news slip of paper all those years in his wallet...you have me hooked mark, keep it coming...       janice
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