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Re: Tainted Evidence by Beatriceorme
« Reply #130 on: August 12, 2007, 08:59:27 pm »
I head that RL has been taking up all of her time, but she hasn't forgotten the story, or us, her loyal readers.  :)

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Re: Tainted Evidence by Beatriceorme
« Reply #131 on: November 11, 2007, 12:17:04 pm »



      OMG Beatrice has just left a message on Brokebackslash,,,,,,yippee,,and it looks like there is a chapter attached.....y   e  a  h................ :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:



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Re: Tainted Evidence by Beatriceorme
« Reply #132 on: November 11, 2007, 12:28:34 pm »
Woo Hoo!   Here's the link:

http://community.livejournal.com/lowermanhattan/13892.html

It's not an actual chapter, but she's given us a sample of the different versions of Chapter 37 she's been struggling with.  In any case - great stuff, as always, and, most importantly, reassurance that the story will continue!   :D

A nice birthday present for you, Janice  ;)

Marie
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Re: Tainted Evidence by Beatriceorme
« Reply #133 on: November 11, 2007, 02:08:21 pm »
Wow!  This is definitely interesting news!  I had almost given up on this story.  I'll have to re-read a lot of it before I read any further updates.  But, I remember that this one is really good.  So, I'm excited.

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Re: Tainted Evidence by Beatriceorme
« Reply #134 on: November 11, 2007, 03:19:01 pm »
Woo Hoo!   Here's the link:

http://community.livejournal.com/lowermanhattan/13892.html

It's not an actual chapter, but she's given us a sample of the different versions of Chapter 37 she's been struggling with.  In any case - great stuff, as always, and, most importantly, reassurance that the story will continue!   :D

A nice birthday present for you, Janice  ;)

Marie

And each of those versions is as brilliant as the other... I think she mentioned she wrote 16 different versions of the whole chapter, wow, if each and every one of those versions is this brilliant, I don't even want to know what chapter 37 will be like. Or maybe I do... :D

Didn't we just talk/email about TE a few days ago, Marie? We should do that more often, talk/email about stories that haven't been updated in a while.

I need to just print this whole story, lock myself into a room and don't come out until I completely understand the story! It might be the language barrier as I am a non-native... But the brilliance of the dialogue and her amazing Jack and Ennis shine through and it's just such a wonderful story...

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Re: Tainted Evidence by Beatriceorme
« Reply #135 on: December 26, 2007, 12:24:31 pm »
For those who are still reading this story, here's an update

http://community.livejournal.com/lowermanhattan/14340.html#cutid1

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Re: Tainted Evidence by Beatriceorme
« Reply #136 on: December 28, 2007, 02:51:19 pm »
I'm still reading.   :)  I waited until I had enough time to devote to a slow read of this chapter - it's definitely not a story you can read quickly!  But it's worth the effort.  There are times when each sentence is like a little gem of a puzzle. And the devotion that Counselor Jack and Constable Ennis have for each other is a Beautiful Thing.  It's always a relief when they are together, because even though their situation is so tenuous and they're in so much danger - you just know neither one of them will let anything bad happen to the other. 

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Re: Tainted Evidence by Beatriceorme
« Reply #137 on: December 28, 2007, 08:07:04 pm »
I remember that this is a good story... I'm going to have to do a lot of re-reading to get back into this plot.  But, I remember it was getting really suspenseful.

The update is good news indeed.  :)

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Re: Tainted Evidence by Beatriceorme
« Reply #138 on: December 30, 2007, 11:20:48 am »
Hi Amanda,

You may have already seen these, but B put together some TE Primers, thumbnail sketches of the chapters, that may be helpful in getting up to speed.

Chapters 1 - 12 :  http://community.livejournal.com/lowermanhattan/12300.html

Chapters 13 - 23: http://community.livejournal.com/lowermanhattan/12615.html

Chapters 24 - 34: http://community.livejournal.com/lowermanhattan/12856.html

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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Tainted Evidence by Beatriceorme
« Reply #139 on: June 05, 2008, 01:46:29 pm »
Look what's up - Chapter 38!  :)

http://community.livejournal.com/lowermanhattan/14772.html

I need to gather all my powers of concentration when reading this story, so it'll have to wait until tonight - I'm looking forward to a nice slow read!

Marie
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain