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Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
« on: January 20, 2007, 11:31:53 am »
One of our newest Bettermost members, haunted_by_bbm, has a story she has been working on. Missing Motel Moments and its sequel, Pine Creek.

Missing Motel Moments is finished.

Part 1: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/766.html
Part 2: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/968.html
Part 3: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/1241.html
Part 4: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/1355.html
Part 5: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/1605.html

Pine Creek

Part 1: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/2483.html
Part 2: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/2646.html
Part 3: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/3012.html
Part 4A: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/3138.html
Part 4B: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/3376.html

Missing Motel Moments is the story of Jack and Ennis's night at the Siesta Motel, at the time of their four year reunion. Pine Creek is the fishing trip they went on the next day. Rated NC17. Enjoy!

Leslie

EDIT: Part 4B has been edited to include the correct link.

« Last Edit: January 20, 2007, 07:29:41 pm by MaineWriter »
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Re: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
« Reply #1 on: January 20, 2007, 12:35:54 pm »
Thanks, Leslie  :) This looks good, I don't think there are many stories out there about the night at the Siesta Motel?? I like it that it's finished too. God, I haven't done anything today but read, read and read!!  :D

*goes off to read part 1*

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Re: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
« Reply #2 on: January 20, 2007, 12:57:55 pm »
Thanks, Leslie  :) This looks good, I don't think there are many stories out there about the night at the Siesta Motel?? I like it that it's finished too. God, I haven't done anything today but read, read and read!!  :D

*goes off to read part 1*

I don't know if there are other stories that fill in the night at the Siesta...and I can tell you, this one is HAWT! Enjoy...

L
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Re: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
« Reply #3 on: January 20, 2007, 01:06:05 pm »
I don't know if there are other stories that fill in the night at the Siesta...and I can tell you, this one is HAWT! Enjoy...

L

HAWT is GOOD Leslie!  :P

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Re: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
« Reply #4 on: January 20, 2007, 06:39:43 pm »
I don't know if there are other stories that fill in the night at the Siesta...and I can tell you, this one is HAWT! Enjoy...

L

Thank you, sweetie.   ;)
I was going for a little heat.    ;)

C    :)
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Re: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
« Reply #5 on: January 20, 2007, 06:47:11 pm »
One of our newest Bettermost members, haunted_by_bbm, has a story she has been working on. Missing Motel Moments and its sequel, Pine Creek.

Missing Motel Moments is finished.

Part 1: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/766.html
Part 2: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/968.html
Part 3: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/1241.html
Part 4: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/1355.html
Part 5: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/1605.html

Pine Creek

Part 1: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/2483.html
Part 2: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/2646.html
Part 3: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/3012.html
Part 4A: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/3138.html
Part 4B: http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/3138.html

Missing Motel Moments is the story of Jack and Ennis's night at the Siesta Motel, at the time of their four year reunion. Pine Creek is the fishing trip they went on the next day. Rated NC17. Enjoy!

Leslie


http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/3376.html#cutid1


Hi Leslie,

Thank you so much for the support and the shout out!   hehehe

I've attached the link here for Part 4B of Pine Creek.
I think you have Part 4A listed twice.   :)

Thank you so much for sending me that PM and inviting me to mozy on over here.
I wish I'd found you sooner.
I feel so welcome already!!!   :D

Thanks again.

C    :)

http://haunted-by-bbm.livejournal.com/3376.html#cutid1

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Re: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
« Reply #6 on: January 20, 2007, 07:31:17 pm »
Okay, I modified my original post, so all links should be correct. Thanks for setting me straight, LOL!

Enjoy the story, folks...I know "haunted" is interested in some discussion!

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Re: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
« Reply #7 on: January 22, 2007, 02:04:57 am »


     well dear i am so glad to see you with us...i havent read any of your story, but i certainly

will...i love that you are finished with one and are starting another one...i am always so upset

when there is a story you really like and it never gets finished....i am also glad that you are

welcoming the discussion...                                        and hope you get that other thing

figured out with the chat room...we welcome new people with open arms....janice



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Re: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
« Reply #8 on: January 22, 2007, 04:36:25 am »

     well dear i am so glad to see you with us...i havent read any of your story, but i certainly

will...i love that you are finished with one and are starting another one...i am always so upset

when there is a story you really like and it never gets finished....i am also glad that you are

welcoming the discussion...                                        and hope you get that other thing

figured out with the chat room...we welcome new people with open arms....janice

Janice,

Thank you so much for the warm welcome that I've received this week.
It is so nice to be here...and I really wish I'd found y'all sooner.  lol

I hope you like my stories, and you can pretty much count on me finishing what I start.   The fifth and final part to "Pine Creek" will be posted this Thursday, the 25th.   

And for future stories, if I start one and don't finish it...well, you can pretty much assume then that I've passed on from this world to the next, because that would be the only reason I wouldn't finish.  hehehe   

Both the stories that I've written so far, I started with the end in mind...so I knew exactly where I was going with them.  And since all of my short stories are going to be 'canon,' it'll continue to be the same way...I'll write them fairly quickly.  And I won't go more than a week in between posts.   :) 

Hope that helps, because I agree with you.  I'd hate to be deeply engrossed and in love with a story, and then not have the satisfaction of reading it through to an end.  That would suck.  lol !

Thanks again for the great welcome this week.   :)

C   :)
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Re: Missing Motel Moments by haunted_by_bbm
« Reply #9 on: January 22, 2007, 05:25:13 am »
Hi  haunted.
I started reading your stories two days ago , and I love it ! I've almost finished Pine Creek.
It's good to read about the missing moments and how their relation grew .
And you even managed to put Annie in the story , that's so good .

Thanks for your beautiful stories , and I hope to read many more of them .

Nancy