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Topic: RWYA, Altitude and Liberation by Mel (Read 77236 times)
mvansand76
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RWYA, Altitude and Liberation by Mel
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March 06, 2007, 09:06:59 am »
Hiya all,
This is really scary....! I have been working on a fanfiction story of my own and thought this would be a good time to post the first few chapters...
Right where you are
is an
AU
story. It starts right after Jack and Ennis have parted ways in Signal and Ennis comes home to Alma. It then moves along to 1965. Ennis is married to Alma. Ennis can't stop thinking about Jack, and he thinks he will never see him again, but fate has something in store for the both of them.
Please bear in mind that English is not my native language and I have never written any stories in English!
I am writing this to alleviate some of the pain I still feel when I think of Jack and Ennis and to alleviate the physical pain I have felt in the past four and a half years due to severe RSI.
The pain stole away my creativity and Jack and Ennis handed it back to me with a huge grin on their faces...
Here are the first 6 chapters...
Chapter 1:
http://rightwhere-u-r.livejournal.com/1313.html
Chapter 2:
http://rightwhere-u-r.livejournal.com/1705.html
Chapter 3:
http://rightwhere-u-r.livejournal.com/1961.html
Chapter 4:
http://rightwhere-u-r.livejournal.com/2140.html
Chapter 5:
http://rightwhere-u-r.livejournal.com/2452.html
Chapter 6:
http://rightwhere-u-r.livejournal.com/2727.html
Comments and constructive criticism here or on my livejournal are more than welcome!!!
Link to
Altitude
:
http://rightwhere-u-r.livejournal.com/10736.html
Link to first chapter of
Liberation
:
http://rightwhere-u-r.livejournal.com/11918.html
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Re: Right where you are by Mel (snuitje)
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March 06, 2007, 09:14:25 am »
Aww Mel! SQUEEEEEEEEE! You did it!
Great! You know how much I love this wonderful story of yours and I'm so happy you posted it here
YAY!!
I left a comment on your last chapter on your LJ
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Re: Right where you are by Mel (snuitje)
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March 06, 2007, 10:15:21 am »
Yay for posting! I'm so glad to see this here!
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‘cause the truth is, I already give him everythin’ I got to give, more than I ever even knew I had; ‘n it all for him, all of it, him who is my brother, my father, my child, my friend, my lover, my heart, my soul; my Ennis.
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Re: Right where you are by Mel (snuitje)
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March 06, 2007, 10:49:24 am »
Wow, this is a great start, Mel! Keep writing, please....
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Re: Right where you are by Mel (snuitje)
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March 06, 2007, 01:13:32 pm »
WHOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
Well done for plucking up the courage to post a link to this FANTASTIC story!
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Re: Right where you are by Mel (snuitje)
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March 06, 2007, 01:54:41 pm »
Melissa, I am sooooo happy you decided to post this story! I highly encourage everyone to read it. Melissa is a brilliant writer!
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Re: "Right where you are" by Mel (snuitje)
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March 07, 2007, 07:32:28 am »
Thank you guys!
Why is this so nerve-wrecking?
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Re: "Right where you are" by Mel (snuitje)
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March 07, 2007, 07:42:47 am »
Quote from: Snuitje on March 07, 2007, 07:32:28 am
Thank you guys!
Why is this so nerve-wrecking?
Because you are sharing a piece of yourself. It is like singing in public. That's nerve wracking, too.
L
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Re: "Right where you are" by Mel (snuitje)
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March 07, 2007, 01:21:29 pm »
I read this bit by bit this week and I'm completely swept away. Not only a wonderful story, but a wonderfully written story, full of really great details and images.
Looking forward to more . . .
Thanks,
Marie
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Re: "Right where you are" by Mel (snuitje)
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March 07, 2007, 02:44:01 pm »
BEAUTIFUL last chapter, Mel. I'm glad I was FINALLY able to read it!
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