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Offline Shakesthecoffecan

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Re: They call the wind
« Reply #20 on: May 16, 2007, 11:11:30 pm »
That is so cool, I remember that song and it fits in so well with their time. Thank kew for sharing.
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Re: They call the wind
« Reply #21 on: June 13, 2007, 12:35:48 am »
loneleeb:  One of the most accurate descriptions of Jack, who always seems to be associated with, or accompanied by the wind.

Thanks so much for this.

Simply beautiful!
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Re: They call the wind
« Reply #22 on: June 13, 2007, 01:42:06 am »


      I love that lee.  it is so of Jack...Look what the wind blew in.
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Re: They call the wind
« Reply #23 on: June 13, 2007, 04:13:53 pm »
Aw heck!
Thanks everybody!
I'm glad y'all liked it!  ;D
It's funny, last night we finally got some rain but it was real windy before hand. I just sat on my back deck ant thought about Jack.
I do everytime the wind blows nowdays!
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Re: It's Raining in Riverton
« Reply #24 on: June 13, 2007, 04:19:07 pm »
Littlewing, Susie and Gary,
Thank you so much! I'm glad y'all liked it.
After reading some of y'alls stuff mine pales in comparison.
Thank you though. It means a lot to hear from folks that they liked it.
I was nervous about posting stuff at first but my IMDB friends and my bettermost friends make me feel so comfortable that it's ok.

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Re: It's Raining in Riverton
« Reply #25 on: June 14, 2007, 12:08:36 am »
I remember this from IMDb, loneleeb. It's a beautiful poem. It's it amazing how this story has brought out the writer in each of us?
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Re: They call the wind
« Reply #26 on: June 15, 2007, 07:31:34 pm »
Quote from: loneleeb3 on May 15, 2007, 11:12:52 pm
They call the wind Moriah but I just call him Jack.
He runs his fingers through my hair and sends shivers down my back.
He whispers to me in the swaying of the trees.
He brings me sweet jasmine on the warm summer breeze.
He sings to me of silver stars in the moonless velvet night.
He dances witht he leaves of fall in a whirling twisting flight.
My secret friend, a love that knows no end.
They call the wind Moriah but I just call him Jack.

I know, it's silly but it just came into my head so I thought I'd share it. :)




               stoppit...it is not silly...it is beautiful.. I had no idea you were a writer.  one more talent you have
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Re: They call the wind
« Reply #27 on: June 15, 2007, 11:45:38 pm »
Quote from: loneleeb3 on May 15, 2007, 11:12:52 pm
They call the wind Moriah but I just call him Jack.
He runs his fingers through my hair and sends shivers down my back.
He whispers to me in the swaying of the trees.
He brings me sweet jasmine on the warm summer breeze.
He sings to me of silver stars in the moonless velvet night.
He dances witht he leaves of fall in a whirling twisting flight.
My secret friend, a love that knows no end.
They call the wind Moriah but I just call him Jack.

I know, it's silly but it just came into my head so I thought I'd share it. :)

Beautiful, loneleeb. Very sweet and heartwarming.
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Re: Poetry and one shots by loneleeb3
« Reply #28 on: June 18, 2007, 08:00:53 am »
Thanks everybodY! 8)
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Re: Poetry and one shots by loneleeb3
« Reply #29 on: June 25, 2007, 12:55:21 pm »
Lee this was awesome!  I loved it.

Some of us are writers, but I am not.  So the fact that you can write these poems and stories to help you through "the process" I think is GREAT.

I have been a "reader" and have enjoyed it all so much, especially stories like this where they end up together again in the afterlife.

Thanks for writing this Lee!  :D
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