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Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on June 15, 2007, 05:50:12 am ---When Ennis woke, his fingers were still buried in Jack's hair, and he leaned close, sifting through it, holding it to his lips, and then kissing the averted neck, once and then again, a surge of pleasure welling up, and he engulfed Jack in a bear hug that caused the sleeper to stir, startle, and then moan softly as he woke, captive in Ennis's arms.
"Huh, whuh?" Jack mumbled, still groggy, lifting his head, and Ennis put his lips to that spot once more, fragrant with the salt of his sweat.
"C'mere boy, got somethin fer you."
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This is so sweet! I hope you'll continue it for us. I'm dying to see what happens next! Thanks so much for posting this charming tale!
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Clyde-B on June 15, 2007, 09:32:05 am ---You ought to write "Ghost Whisperer" and sell them your idea!
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Hi, Clyde-B! Thanks for your kind words. The Ghost Whisperer? I really like that show. I may consider selling them my idea! :)
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Clyde-B on June 15, 2007, 01:56:06 pm ---Now you know I don't talk often, and when I do I don't usually say much (My motto: if you ain't got nothin to say - then don't say it!)
But for you and littlewing, who's been after me to do this, I'll sure make an attempt.
BannerHill's story about Ennis and Jack winding up together got me to wondering how it mght happen. This isn't a sexy story, but it's kinda timely.
Robert Twist hadn’t been to Childress in twenty-five years; he’d never forgotten or forgiven things said when his dad died, but he was determined to visit his father’s grave on his way to Dallas to see his mother and her third husband. Sunday would be Father’s Day.
He was glad the road to the cemetery was deserted, the only traffic an old blue and white pickup kicking dust in the opposite direction.
The headstone was where he remembered it, toward the back, in the shade of an old oak where the hot breeze carried with it the scent of memorial wreaths and dying blossoms. A single grave in a double plot overgrown with weeds, unkempt, untrimmed; the granite weathered but intact; graffiti on the front had been hard washed, faded, no longer legible. Not as good as he’d hoped; not as bad as he’d feared. He knelt wanting to speak, but the words wouldn’t come, all those questions, all those things left unsaid, how could we have just abandoned you here? That was when he noticed... lovingly placed at its base... a small bunch of wilting mountain wildflowers.
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Clyde-B, you're such a natural at this! What a beautiful story! I am so glad you wrote this for us. And it was well worth the wait! I want more of your writing. Please favoring us with another fic. Wonderful!
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Dagi on June 15, 2007, 03:23:15 pm ---I love our boys so much...and I LOVE this thread! Thanks to all of you!
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Hey there you cutie, you! What an awesome tatoo!
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 12:05:51 am ---Ennis was about to ride away when Jack caught hold of the reigns and looked up to him.
Yet it was not the yearning expression in his babyblue eyes but this bewitching, seductive tip of his tongue, visible for only a moment licking those perfect lips that made Ennis dismount in a quick, deft movement and, one hand around Jack´s neck, the other one with a firm grip on his victim´s butt pushing his groin merciless against his own, he pressed his lips hungrily on his lover´s mouth his desirous tongue entering it in un uncontrollable urge, making Jack´s knees give way under him.
Hot waves flowing through their bodies and one rough lustful groan later they both knew: sheep be damned.
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Awesome, Dagi! So spontaneous and passionate! Just like our boys! ::)
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