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Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Dagi:
--- Quote from: Susiebell on June 16, 2007, 06:27:59 am ---Dagi! That was so smoking hot, girly! I love Jack/Jake's eyes but it's the tip of his tongue that really does it for me too! I'd have jumped off that horse and pounced on him too!
I love love love it!
Susie
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Thank you, Susie! Finally I got the "hot"-label, yeeehaaawww!
Clyde-B:
--- Quote from: Susiebell on June 16, 2007, 07:03:02 am ---"Ich liebe dich Jack"
"Ich liebe dich Ennis"
Sie Kuessten.
Pathetic!!!! But at least I didn't use that swear word!!
Susie
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Hi Susie, glad you got the best of your nasty vermin!
I like the direction you're going in here!
Und dann bumsen sie. ;D
Clyde-B:
--- Quote from: littlewing1957 on June 16, 2007, 01:59:13 am ---Extreme AU, but I just had to do it!
Jack Twist bounced the beautiful baby girl on his knee while watching Ennis Del Mar set the dining room table. Baby Indigo was only a year old, and she was the apple of Jack’s eye. Ennis was rather fond of her, as well. Indigo laughed and shrieked as Jack ticked her double chin. “Jack, bring our child!” Ennis called from the dining room.
Indigo was an extreme blessing: a gift of love to such sincere lovers. Ennis cuddled his daughter as Jack handed her over. He thought back to the time when he handed a cup of his semen over to a nurse at the clinic in town. The surrogate was chosen carefully, and some nine months later, Jack strapped Indigo into a car seat and brought her home. Ennis never stopped smiling from the time he laid eyes on her!
Dinner was ready and the table was set. Ennis kissed the top of his child’s head and handed her back to daddy Jack. He needed to get ready to entertain his other daughters, who should be along any time now. Jack was already looking mighty fine, and couldn’t wait to see Bobby again. He placed his daughter in her playpen and embraced his lover. “Happy Father’s Day, friend!” Jack whispered as he held his lover tight.” “Same to you, Jack!” Ennis kissed him. “Now let me go. I gotta get ready to greet our other babies!”
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This sweet story makes me a little sad. It would have been nice if this was really available.
MaineWriter:
My first entry in this game. I like the foreign language twist. Thanks to Natali who helped with the translation!
Jack miró a Ennis y dijo. “Te amo vaquero.”
”Yo te amo a ti,” respondió Ennis, acariciando con sus dedos la barbilla de Jack.
Jack, rió entre dientes. “Lo dije yo primero.”
“Pero yo lo digo mejor”, contestó Ennis inclinándose para besarlo.
L
Toycoon:
--- Quote ---Dagi! That was so smoking hot, girly! I love Jack/Jake's eyes but it's the tip of his tongue that really does it for me too! I'd have jumped off that horse and pounced on him too!
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You know it, Lady Susiebell! Dagi, you're getting quite skilled at your English writing.
Your friends will be very impressed and your husband will be floored by what you've learned!
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