Brokeback Mountain: Our Community's Common Bond > Brokeback Mountain Fan Fiction & Poetry
Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
cwby30:
--- Quote from: Littlewing on August 22, 2008, 11:06:55 pm ---Will you continue the story?
--- End quote ---
Evenin'.
Well, Yes, I plan on doing that. I've saved several sets of prompts from the Drabblefest, and am working them in to the next 3-paragraph "game" entry. Nice to be back, and glad you like it.
Have been reading your stories these past several weeks, and enjoying them. You pick such perfect points in their lives, and develop the ideas so well.
Thanks again.
Toycoon:
Hello Mr. cwby30 and Miss Littlewing1957. How are you guys doin'? I haven't been writing much except for bizarre interpretations of our beloved story on IMDb. You're free to join in on the inanity I've created on that message board.
Luvlylittlewing:
Ennis breezed into Bobby’s elaborately decorated nursery and walked over to his crib. “You sure got a fine looking son here, Bud,” he whispered to Jack, the proud papa, standing on the other side of Bobby’s crib. “Thank you kindly, friend,” Jack whispered back. He was only too happy to show off his only child to his only true love.
Jack was alone with Bobby for the weekend while Lureen was away in Dallas on a short holiday. She met with her sorority sisters once a year for a few days of whatever sorority sisters do when they meet up. It was his first time alone with Bobby, and he was a bit nervous. Ennis happened to be in town and stopped by. Jack couldn’t believe his luck! Ennis never seemed to travel anywhere, and how fortuitous that he should visit when Jack felt most vulnerable. Ennis couldn’t seem to take his eyes off of little Bobby. Jack feasted his eyes on his best friend. He was insanely happy.
Little Bobby began to stir and Jack was nervous. He didn’t know what to do. But Ennis, already the father of 2 fine little girls, took over. He gently removed the tiny child from his crib and placed him over his broad shoulders. He tenderly patted the baby's back as Jack looked on, fascinated. "What a strong young man you are," Ennis whispered in Bobby's ear. "I can feel your strength!" Jack beamed with pride. “It's kinda cool in here, Bud, Ennis exclaimed. Get me a blanket.” Jack did what he was told. Ennis placed Bobby on the changing table and began to teach Jack how to properly wrap the babe in the blanket. “You got it, now, Rodeo?’ Ennis asked Jack as he handed him his son, all toasty warm and content in a snuggly wrapped blankie. “I think so,” Jack answered.
“You think so what?” Lureen asked, incredulous, as she shook Jack's shoulders. “Jack, the baby is crying and you’re asleep!” Jack shook himself awake and cringed as Lureen walked over to the crib and tended to Bobby. “What am I gonna do with you?” Lureen whispered, absently, as she changed Bobby’s diaper. “How could you sleep through the racket that Bobby was making?” Jack didn’t answer. He had fallen asleep on a chaise next to Bobby’s crib, but didn’t hear his son crying. It seems he was too busy learning how to tend to his son: a lesson learned only in his dreams.
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Toycoon on August 23, 2008, 08:26:28 pm ---Hello Mr. cwby30 and Miss Littlewing1957. How are you guys doin'? I haven't been writing much except for bizarre interpretations of our beloved story on IMDb. You're free to join in on the inanity I've created on that message board.
--- End quote ---
I've followed your comedy thread, Love, but I'm not clever enough to join in. If I think of something silly, I'll post it there! :)
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: cwby30 on August 23, 2008, 12:08:45 am ---Evenin'.
Well, Yes, I plan on doing that. I've saved several sets of prompts from the Drabblefest, and am working them in to the next 3-paragraph "game" entry. Nice to be back, and glad you like it.
Have been reading your stories these past several weeks, and enjoying them. You pick such perfect points in their lives, and develop the ideas so well.
Thanks again.
--- End quote ---
Thanks for your kind words, my friend. Stay with us. I look forward to reading more of your amazing tale, and I'm working on other stories, including the latest installment of Right.
Navigation
[0] Message Index
[#] Next page
[*] Previous page
Go to full version