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Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Luvlylittlewing:
I have found my mate! I knew it from the very first time my eyes met his. Oh no..before then! How can I describe what I felt when I turned from my truck and laid eyes on the handsomest creature I ever saw? He was like a lost puppy: all desperate and defeated like he would never find home. My heart almost shattered my chest, but I had to keep my cool. I had to keep it all together because…well...because…he wouldn’t feel the same way, now would he? Still, in my mind, I have found my mate! I found my king.
Luvlylittlewing:
Lay your body down next to me
Forget your worries, can’t you see
Love is waiting by my side,
Your cares will flow away with the tide.
Ennis! Lay down your fears
My chest and arms are free
Let me hold you!
Come down next to me.
Don’t be afraid,
You know I’m near.
I’ll make it all better
That’s why I’m here.
That’s good - snuggle warm
Come in deep, far from harm.
No need to worry about any little thing,
You’re my mate! You’re my king!
Luvlylittlewing:
Jack lowered the little lamb onto the cold earth and released it from the make-shift splint that supported it while on horseback. The tiny creature trembled a bit when it reached the ground, but Jack grabbed it almost immediately and tenderly held it in his strong arms until the shivering subsided. Ennis watched as Jack inspected the animal for scrapes and other signs of trauma. "What's wrong with the lamb," Ennis asked his friend as he drew closer. "She seems a bit sluggish and wouldn't even feed. I'm afraid she either has something irritating her, or maybe she's sick," Jack announced without even looking up. Ennis smiled as Jack continued his inspection. He was impressed! If things had been different, that Jack Twist would have done well as a vet.
Ennis watched over the rest of the herd as Jack pulled a good sized thorn from the lamb's left shank. He rubbed the back of the animal's neck and carried her over to where her mother was grazing with the others. Ennis and Jack watched as the lamb nuzzled close to her mother and began to nurse. Ennis placed a hand on Jack's shoulder. "Good work, Jack," Ennis exclaimed. I hope Aguirre appreciates how good you are with the sheep!" Jack had to grin at that, and he patted the hand on his shoulder.
"I had better head back to camp and put on supper," Jack announced as he gathered his gear to load onto his mare. "Nothing but beans and some bacon to add for seasoning. I think I may have a few biscuits left over from last night that I can heat up." Ennis nodded and continued to watch over the herd. He watched in silence as Jack rode off. Jack was quite a sexy, tantilizing sight with his rear end bouncing on the saddle. Ennis fought the urge to put his hand into his tight jeans. He could wait. That Jack Twist was good with the sheep, but with Ennis, he was even better. More better....
Luvlylittlewing:
Jack opened the can of dog food, and for the first time, took a serious look at it. He saw that the wet Alpo had a meaty quality, even though it had a distinctive, disgusting smell. He whistled for Bluebell and filled a small bowl full of the food for her. Bluebell ate heartily as Jack watched. Jack couldn't explain his mischevious streak, but knew that one day his love of practical jokes would be his undoing. Watching Bluebell enjoy her food gave him an idea.
He left about an inch of Alpo in the can and opened a couple cans of BetterMost beans. Jack averted his nose as he poured the remainer of the Alpo into a frying pan and separated it with a fork as it hardened and lumped into a consistency like taco meat. Right before the dog food charred, Jack added the beans to the Alpo. He dropped in a stick of butter and moved the mixture from the heat. "That Ennis is in for a unique dining experience tonight," Jack chuckled.
Ennis rode in, and after securing his mare and washing up as thoroughly as was possible, sat right beside Jack on a log by the dinner fire. He watched as Jack heaped mounds of beans and another substance he didn't recognize onto tin plates. "What is this, Jack," Ennis asked as he was handed a plate of beans and Alpo. "Smells well...strange." "Don't worry about that, friend," Jack enthused. "Eat up!" Ennis shrugged and grabbed a fork from his friend. He gathered a large chunk of Jack's concoction onto his fork and moved it to his mouth. "Wait.....!!!!," Jack yelled with a start. He shot straight up from his nap and realized with relief that he had been dreaming and that Ennis was nowhere to be found. Jack rubbed his eyes and tried not to think of what would have happened if he actually fed dog food to Ennis and Ennis found out about it. "Jack Twist, you're a crazy fool," he spoke out loud. Jack pulled himself up and whistled for Bluebell. Time for her lunch!
Luvlylittlewing:
Jack always dreaded saying goodbye after a satisfying "fishing" expidition, but all good things had to come to an end. Ennis and Jack were on the road back to the truck stop where Ennis left his vehicle for the week, and Jack was trying to get comfortable behind the wheel. Jack's favorite position was feet flat on the floor of his late model red truck, his arm out the driver's side window, his right hand resting between Ennis' thighs. Ennis liked the feel of Jack's hand moving up and down his manhood, but he had to put a stop to it. What if he became so aroused that he needed Jack to stop? And what would happen if some trucker in a tall cab happened along and witnessed Jack feeling him up?
Jack respected Ennis' wishes; he even had to agree with him. But it was so hard to sit so close to his lover and refrain from touching him. Jack kept his eye on the road but couldn't help glancing at his husband. The tension was so thick that neither could think of any sort of small talk to fill the hours until the truck stop came into view. Ennis sat still and wished he could cross his legs. He was aroused and wanted ro hide it.
But Jack noticed and felt his heart race. He saw the bulge between Ennis' thighs and his eyes grew narrow and then bulged at the tantalizing sight. Jack moved his hand closer to his lover, convinced that just one feel wouldn't hurt. Ennis didn't pull away as Jack placed his hand on his manhood. Just then, both men heard a piercing honk, looked up and saw the handsome features of a trucker looking down at them. The man had a curious smirk on his sensuous mouth, and he pointed to the next turnoff. Ennis sat, terrified, but Jack was the cool one. He shrugged innocently at the trucker and shook his head. The man saw, pouted his disappointment and turned his head toward the road. He exited the highway and Ennis was able to breathe again. "That was a close one, Friend," Jack whispered. "Yeah," Ennis began, "I told you about that before, Rodeo. One day we was bound to be caught. You gotta control yourself in the future." Jack nodded his agreement, but he was silent. He couldn't help wondering what the trucker had in mind.
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