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Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Luvlylittlewing:
Jack watched Ennis soaping himself. Ennis was aware that Jack’s eyes were on him, and he had to be aware of his husband’s growing lust. Jack brought along a portable “shower” to hang from a tree branch or any place high, and he was glad he did. Ennis didn’t hesitate to use the shower after Jack strung it up. He stripped, gathered his soap and a loofah sponge and stood perfectly still as Jack turned the spigot. Ennis looked up as the spray coated and slicked his hair. Jack backed up in an effort to take in the tantalizing view.
Jack noticed that Ennis’ glorious body had not changed much over the years. If anything, Ennis’ bod was even better – sexier. Jack’s eyes grew wild as he took in Ennis’ firm, high buttocks. His butt cheeks were granite hard and smooth. Jack didn’t know how Ennis maintained his killer physique. Jack placed a hand on his own wide paunch, but he wasn’t ashamed that he was letting himself go. Ennis liked his spreading middle; he even remarked that Jack was giving him more to love.
Jack watched as Ennis turned his body under the spray. He was transported back to Brokeback when Ennis asked for a bit of hot water and washed everything he could reach. Jack had the self-control to avert his gaze then, but to look away was impossible now. Jack wondered how long he could stand it. Ennis noticed his lover’s torment and stepped from the steady stream of water. He moved closer to Jack and threw the soap and sponge aside. Jack ran into his arms, not caring a wit that he was getting very wet and very soapy.
gwyllion:
Yay! You're back! Just wonderful as always! :D
Monika:
woho! Please, don´t stop there :o
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Gwyllion on April 14, 2009, 02:07:03 pm ---Yay! You're back! Just wonderful as always! :D
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Thanks, Babe! I've been a bit occupied lately, but I can't stay away long! Thanks so much for your kind words!
Luvlylittlewing:
--- Quote from: Buffymon on April 14, 2009, 02:23:33 pm ---woho! Please, don´t stop there :o
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I won't, love! I'll try to continue later on this week. Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
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