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Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition

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gwyllion:
 :'( :'( :'(

 :P

Happy New Year!

Luvlylittlewing:
Happy New Year, Sweets!  :-*

Luvlylittlewing:
Jack walked onto the raised platform with a coy smile on his handsome face.  A lovely young woman in a cheap evening gown approached him carrying a small loving cup and a large check.  Jack won the Texas State Rodeo championship and he couldn't be happier or more pleased with himself.  He accepted the check and the trophy from the beautiful lady, and allowed her to kiss his ruddy cheek. 

Jack stepped up to the microphone to make his victory speech to spectators, judges and fellow contestants.  He was terrified of public speaking, but managed to thank his parents, his wife and son and all of his "fans" who stood by him and cheered him on.  After his brief talk, Jack was led off the stage by the pretty woman who handed him the trophy and the check for $5.000.

Lureen met Jack at the bar after the ceremony and she kissed him full on the mouth.  Jack woke up just then and realized that his wife was actually kissing him.  He shrugged her off and when he got his bearings, was annoyed that Lureen woke him from a dream; the only time he would ever win a State Rodeo tournament.  Jack looked at Lureen lying there, stricken.  It was obvious that she wanted a bit of loving, but Jack wouldn't oblige her.  He turned away and tried to head back to sleep.  Perhaps he could actually pick up the dream where it left off.  He would re-enter a fantasy where he was $5.000 richer.  He could put that money away for a time when Ennis agreed to that sweet life: a life that might only be realized in his dreams.

Luvlylittlewing:
It started calm and smooth, almost mindlessly, instinctively.  Jack raised his hands high over his head, Ennis did the same.  Ennis touched Jack's slightly damp fingertips, rubbed ever so lightly.  Jack held his lover's gaze; Ennis couldn't look away from those blue eyes, his heart began to race!

Jack's fingers moved slowly downward until he reached his lover's firm and toned arms.  Ennis, his arms still raised, shivered as Jack caressed.  Ennis lowered his arms to respond better to Jack's fevered touch.  It was Ennis' turn to touch, to love.

It was a slow, sweet dance.  Jack pulled Ennis close and held on tight as he rocked back and forth.  Ennis was happy to go along for the ride.  It was a welcome pleasure, especially after a day filled with the monotomy of tending sheep.  Jack could have held his lover for hours, but Ennis had other ideas.

Luvlylittlewing:
It was a rainy Friday and Ennis had taken care of the supplies issue.  The Basque was particularly generous and slipped a large salami in with the beans, biscuits and powdered milk.  Ennis smiled as he saw the black spotted, maroon colored salami.  The Basque saw the smile and wondered what it was all about.  He shook his head as he watched Ennis walk off up toward the mountain.  Who could figure out young people these days?

Ennis slipped as he scaled the mountain path in the aftermath of the cloudburst.  He almost fell flat on his face, and winced as the mare momentarily lost her footing and threatened to spill the contents of the pack onto the mud covered earth.  It wouldn’t do to have a repeat of the debacle with the bear.  Jack wouldn’t tolerate beans for another week or so, and Ennis didn’t think he could kill another elk.   But the mare was a soldier.  She carried the supplies up without incident.

Ennis was back in camp and had plenty of time to get everything ready for Jack’s return.  He scampered around, avoiding puddles and mud soaked Earth.  When the salami was cut and the beans were simmering, Jack rode up and leapt off of his horse.  He saw Ennis standing by the fire and without thinking ran over to him and tackled him to the ground.  Ennis was thrown into a puddle and found himself wresting with a laughing Jack Twist.  Ennis avoided muddy messes all day, but once Jack appeared on the scene, he was soaking and filthy.  Best to go with it, Ennis thought.  He would get his revenge later on – later that night!

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