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New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
mariez:
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The return of "Uncle Ellery" LOL! Who wouldn't be okay with Uncle Ellery and his checkbook? Sign me up. ;D
Pam doesn't need any more stress, and she certainly doesn't need or deserve her mother's anger directed toward her. I'm glad both Colson and Ellery realize that communications between Laura and Pam (and anyone in Tourmaline for that matter) have to stop and are ready to take action.
It will be interesting to see Colson visiting Jeremy and Nick - we've never seen him or Ellery at their apartment! And I've been curious about how Jeremy's issues with his sister's sexual assault and his own strained relationship with his mother will play into the situtation, especially now that it looks like he and Nick will be neighbors with the twins. Interesting developments...
Thanks!
Marie
mariez:
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I forgot to mention my favorite part:
“We’re gonna have ta watch ourselves with these girls,” Ellery added. “We start out gettin em an apartment an we might come home with a farm.”
I love the familial tone of this - two parents talking about their girls. :) And Ellery hasn't given up the farm idea!
Marie
louisev:
no, Ellery has definitely not given up on the farm idea.
Have to have 'future developments' don't you know!
And now, a late-breaking Chapter 32. Sorry about that, I have been somewhat distracted with job applications and politics blogs and such. Mea Culpa!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/265369.html
mariez:
Geez, Louise, no need to apologize - and I always like the sound of "future" developments!
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It's always great to listen in on a Colson-Jeremy talk. They have such a natural rapport and it was nice for Jeremy to have a turn at reassuring Colson.
“Good deal. If he gets one a the unfurnished ones them girls might be talkin em inta matchin bedroom sets an a hi fi console in the livin room.”
LOL! Our Nicky is no slouch himself at getting what he wants, so it's not surprising that he's got the twins pegged exactly!
“I couldn’t say no, you know how us uncles are,” Ellery said, smiling modestly.
Ha! Uncle Ellery you old softie, you! :laugh:
Great story, Louise Thanks!
Marie
louisev:
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You said it, Marie,
he knows what he would do with a rich uncle, that's for sure, push for whatever he can get!
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