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New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
louisev:
okay, no I haven't forgotten!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/265496.html 'Chapter 33'
mariez:
We know you'd never forget your Tourmaline boys (and girls), Louise. :)
SPOILERS
I like Nick's practicality and matter-of-factness; a nice counter-point to all the drama. This is going to be a huge adjustment for both girls, especially Pam; but, hopefully, being somewhat independent will help both of them mature. I'm glad they have a support system in place, though, because there is no way that Pam can fully realize what is in store for her.
I'm also glad the girls got to see Daddy and Uncle Ellery grousing at each other a bit so that they don't have an overly idealized view of any relationship. Changing phone numbers is a good thing; but I have an uncomfortable feeling about the restraining order..........
It was a brief visit, but it would be interesting to hear J&N's private impressions of the quick glimpse they got of the girls and the situation. There's always so much going on beneath the surface in every chapter!
Thanks, Louise!
Marie
louisev:
well gang, I started out a bit late today and got cracking on a long-overdue project with my taxes, and I am a bit blown out now.
Whew.
If anyone wants to know what I've been up to, I posted on my blog. But that part is done, I probably have another hour or two to check math and fill out some 'clean' forms before getting the stuff ready to post, but for THIS weekend, the tax thing is DONE. I am hoping to have my stamina back so I can resume my story tomorrow, and maybe send out some new resumes.
I am hoping to hear about the gummint job in Oklahoma City on Monday and a possible screening interview.
louisev:
and here is chapter 34!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/265810.html
mariez:
SPOILERS
I've been waiting for the Teddy Eldredge connection to be made and now it has been. I'm glad Pam has Paula in her corner.
I'm glad Wes was able to ease Colson's mind a little. But I'm wondering what kind of ideas he has for putting the reins on Laura....I think Wes should answer the phone the next time it rings, he seems to be the only one Laura's been intimidated by so far!
Thanks, Louise!
Marie
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