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New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
souxi:
--- Quote from: Gabriel on April 06, 2008, 06:07:05 pm ---SPOILERS
I've been waiting for the Teddy Eldredge connection to be made and now it has been. I'm glad Pam has Paula in her corner.
I'm glad Wes was able to ease Colson's mind a little. But I'm wondering what kind of ideas he has for putting the reins on Laura....I think Wes should answer the phone the next time it rings, he seems to be the only one Laura's been intimidated by so far!
Thanks, Louise!
Marie
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Let me at her Marie, I,ll bloody intimidate the old cow with one of my famous Souxi glares. Apparantly my sons mates are terrifed of me, they think I,m well scary. :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
mariez:
--- Quote from: souxi on April 07, 2008, 03:57:35 am ---Let me at her Marie, I,ll bloody intimidate the old cow with one of my famous Souxi glares. Apparantly my sons mates are terrifed of me, they think I,m well scary. :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
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LOL! No doubt, souxi! I think they're in need of a new bouncer at the bar - I'll bet the "Souxi glare" would work there, too! :laugh:
Marie
louisev:
you are giving me evil ideas for new bar staff!
But now here is chapter 35!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/266198.html
mariez:
SPOILERS
...weighed down with grief, tormented with guilt, or petrified with anxiety...
What an awful way to live. That breaks my heart - for both Colson and Ellery. It's understandable that his fears and anxieties (which are not completely baseless) would surface again. Vengeance is such a hollow shell. Does Laura feel better after gossiping to the detective and making sure Colson knew? Not at all.
“We’ll get through this too, ya know.”
It's wonderful to see how supportive and protective the boys are of each other's needs (and the little bit about who is the best shot in the county was sweet). :)
And I can't believe I'm saying this - but it was a relief to hear about those effin' mice again! LOL! And Ellery's standard "..the bar burnin down?” always makes me laugh.
Beautifully written chapter, Louise - thanks!
Marie
louisev:
SPOILER!
It was a bit unexpected for me too but ... this is the nature of his legacy of being in the closet. By now it's more like a bad habit but there isn't any way to deal with it except head-on, and with a lot of liquor!
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