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souxi:
Sure maybe it is painfull for Laura, but think how much more painful it is for poor Pam, she was the one who was raped. I think Laura is a selfcentred hateful bitter twisted old cow. She thinks about no one but herself. Her daughter has gone through one of the worst things a woman can possible go through and she needs her mothers love and support. Laura is going to end up a very lonely old woman, because she,ll drive everyone away from her at this rate. She,ll have no one to blame but herself for that. I'm having a bad week and I,m right out of sympathy, can you tell?  :laugh:

mariez:

--- Quote from: souxi on April 24, 2008, 08:13:52 am ---Sure maybe it is painfull for Laura, but think how much more painful it is for poor Pam, she was the one who was raped. I think Laura is a selfcentred hateful bitter twisted old cow. She thinks about no one but herself. Her daughter has gone through one of the worst things a woman can possible go through and she needs her mothers love and support. Laura is going to end up a very lonely old woman, because she,ll drive everyone away from her at this rate. She,ll have no one to blame but herself for that. I'm having a bad week and I,m right out of sympathy, can you tell?  :laugh:

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souxi, I'm not trying to defend Laura and I'm certainly not trying to deny poor Pam's anguish - I was just giving my thoughts on your question about "why" Laura can't accept the fact that Pam was raped.  It's totally frustrating to try and apply logic to irrational behavior.  And I completely agree that if she continues in this manner she will end up alone. 

Marie

louisev:
mooooore story!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/268246.html  'Chapter 43'

mariez:
SPOILERS









....I’ve taken a belt ta my boy.”

Hmm...ya know, Esteban, I think you're making Joe's case for him.  Larry, Jr. isn't exactly an advertisement for the success of corporal punishment. 

I'm glad to see that Paula seems to be hitting her stride as a.d.a.  And it's really nice to see her and Ellery working together so well, but the cirumstances are so sad.  I agree that Pam shouldn't be burdened with the details of Laura's note, but I think Paula did the right in obtaining the restraining order.  After the phone call from Teddy, the note, and Laura's behavior with Paula, I don't see how Wes could make an argument against one, but I am concerned about Laura's reaction when she's served.  I'm very interested in finding out what Detective Blue is up to, also - and if the prosecutor is aware of it. 

Thanks, Louise!
Marie

louisev:
thank you all once again for all of your comments, particularly Marie who is here all the time, I thrive on comments!

In case you don't follow my blog, I am doing my last minute moving, cleaning, and errand things, and today is Jiffy Lube day for the car, so I just don't have a lot of time available right now to write. I  am hoping I have enough mental time to get some writing in while I am on my 4 day trip but I"m not promising anything there, either!!  Please be patient while I get relocated to my next destination, thanks!

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