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louisev:
okey doke, chapter 44!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/268486.html

This might be the last chapter I can get done before leaving town so it's extra large!

mariez:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on April 28, 2008, 10:22:20 pm ---okey doke, chapter 44!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/268486.html

This might be the last chapter I can get done before leaving town so it's extra large!

--- End quote ---


What a nice surprise this morning - you're too good to us, Louise!

SPOILERS







Can't say it enough - thank God for Wes!  I'm relieved he served Laura personally.   You could hear the years of experience in every measured, wise word he spoke.  I thought it was so telling that Laura basically ignored everything Wes said about the rape and Pam trying to seek justice and focused once again on the fact that Pam is moving away from her and taking up with her "pervert Daddy."  And I see that she now includes Katie Ann as part of the conspiracy.  When (if) the truth finally hits her about Pam's assault, I'm afraid it's going to hit very, very hard.  I'm more than curious about what's been going on in Prescott with the detectives and prosecutor.  And Laura said there would be no threats in her letter to Pam, but will it be loaded with guilt trips?

That was excellent!

Thanks,
Marie

louisev:
Well gang, here it is, my last day at my job in California, and I am going to be packing up and getting ready to go when I arrive home.  My cable modem is packed in a box ready to go back to Comcast and I have to go pick up a prescription as I head out of town, so I won't be writing anymore before I go.

I hope things have got to a comfortable "pause" in the story so you can wait a few days, because I have to go off and drive all day for the next four days!

thanks for your patience and as always, for the wonderful comments!

belbbmfan:
Have a safe trip Louise! 4 days huhn? You're certainly not travelling round the coffeepot looking for the handle are you?  :)

I think I'll do some rereading...

louisev:
no I sure am not!  I get around, Fabienne!  And I will be posting some photos of various places on my blog.
I wrote my itinerary up  there - from northern California, through northern Utah, across southern Wyoming, Nebraska southwest to northeast, Iowa right across the middle, and across the top of Illinois.

At the height of spring!

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