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New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on July 23, 2008, 09:12:38 pm ---and the next chapter 63!!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/273865.html
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Good news that it's not as bad as last time! But Friday is going to take forever to get here for these two .....
I like that Ellery always manages to put in a good word for Jeremy when he's with Doc Sampson.
“There was shit goin on at the time, sweetheart, don’t look at me that way!”
Uh, I hate to state the obvious, Ellery - but there's always shit goin on with you two! LOL! The easy "I love ya no matter what" and shoullder pat were sweet. Jeremy done good! :)
Thanks, Louise!
Marie
louisev:
Ellery always likes to imagine that his ignoring his own warning signs are due to external factors. The true sign of someone who doesn't look after himself.
louisev:
change up!
Chapter 65: http://louisev.livejournal.com/273970.html
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on July 24, 2008, 09:49:38 pm ---change up!
Chapter 65: http://louisev.livejournal.com/273970.html
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Ah, yes - I've been wondering about ol' Amos. Poor Jeremy. I understand his nervousness, but I know he'll do fine. He always comes through when he needs to. And so does Paula.
Three years for Eldredge? Shit. That sucks. But I don't want Pam to go through a trial. I wonder if Laura really understands the repercussions of her actions. Sigh.
I can tell that you like the law and order stuff - you do it so well. :)
Marie
louisev:
and chapter 66!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/274197.html
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