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New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
mariez:
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Louise, I thought the deal was five years probation, but he only serves three?
Well, it wasn't hard to convince Pam. I understand how much she wants to put it all behind her, but I have to believe that won't be as easy to do as Pam might think. :-\ Paula's conversation with Laura will be very interesting, to say the least.
“Poor boy has a trick rib now I imagine,” Edna said..
LOL! Ellery and his famous "trick rib." If Colson could hear his girls......
Oh, and that reminds me: Note to Colson: I know there's crap flying all around you and you're stressed out, but Paula is being very generous in doing your daughter a big favor here, so maybe next time you cross paths with her, a polite "thank you" might be in order? You are 'Mr. Please and Thank You" after all! ;)
Thanks, Louise!
Marie
louisev:
you are absolutely right, I was getting the two plea offers mixed in my mind, I corrected it on the chapter!
He may be Mr. Please and Thank You but when his man is hurting, Mr. Coyote can be gruff!
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on July 27, 2008, 11:34:24 am ---He may be Mr. Please and Thank You but when his man is hurting, Mr. Coyote can be gruff!
--- End quote ---
So very true. I do love that big, strong, walking paradox of a man! :)
Marie
louisev:
sorry for the lack of updates, but I am doing two things this week - changing projects, and changing homes. last week I had a "finishing up lull" and now is the "finishing up last minute stuff!" along with hauling my food and suitcases and computers over to my new place.
But I feel quite chipper about it all!
louisev:
and here is a new chapter of The Grey Girls!!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/274579.html
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