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mariez:
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Looks like good news on the Amos front - I think he's finally running out of delaying tactics.  It made me laugh how they're passing that 'hot potato' of a phone call to Ellery onto Wesley!  He's one of the few people not intimidated by Colson LOL!

Jeremy is a sweetheart and he's good at handling awkward situations.  But poor Paula - she needs a social life, Louise!

Thanks!
Marie

louisev:
well you know how hard I resist happy endings for everybody, Marie!!!

there's no plot if everyone has a happy ending.  Besides... I got plans.

louisev:
and lookie here, another chapter at last!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/274847.html  'Chapter 68'

mariez:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on August 04, 2008, 09:57:55 am --- .....Besides... I got plans.
--- End quote ---

Now, that makes me a happy camper!


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Colson reading Agatha Christie always reminds me of the early days in their relationship  :)   But Colson really needs to calm down about Paula!  I know he's a jealous guy but I can't help but believe this jealousy thing is just being exacerbated by all the other crap that's flying around him. 

“Cause...” Jeremy paused, and Ellery heard a brief intake of breath before Jeremy spoke again. “Cause he’s right.”

Sigh.  I'm not so sure honesty was the best policy here.  I mean, what the heck is Ellery supposed to do with that information?  And things were going so much better between Paula and him......

Thanks, Louise - even though they're cranky right now, I always love seeing our boys together! 

Marie

louisev:
we are getting near the end here folks!

Chapter 69:  http://louisev.livejournal.com/275147.html

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