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New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on August 11, 2008, 08:13:14 pm ---we are getting near the end here folks!
Chapter 69: http://louisev.livejournal.com/275147.html
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I can't believe this is already Chapter 69, Louise - I'm always a little sad to see one of the tales come to an end, but you did say you had plans, and I always like your plans ...... :)
SPOILERS
“I guess that’s a bit too much, huh...” he trailed off.
Um, yeah, Colson. Just a bit. ::) Good Lord, what would he do if Ellery didn't get nauseous thinking of women?
...Don’t hate me cause I’m beautiful..”
That's a shampoo commercial from the 80's! LOL! I love it. And, actually, Ellery is a lot more beautiful than the actress that did the commercials. Glad they came to an understanding (for the time being). I do love when Colson tucks a lock of hair behind Ellery's ear. Sigh.
Thanks, Louise!
Marie!
louisev:
boy you're quick!!! I always love to read your faithful commentaries, Marie!
And yes, I have plans. I have to let them stew a bit though!
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on August 11, 2008, 09:24:04 pm ---And yes, I have plans. I have to let them stew a bit though!
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Hey, that's fine, Louise! "Stewing" makes things tastier! ;)
Marie
louisev:
okay folks, the final chapter!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/275270.html 'Chapter 70'
mariez:
SPOILERS
Great to see Colson and Ellery in (relative) peace! :) And, although it was under the worst of circumstances, it appears to be a very good thing indeed for the girls to move to Tourmaline and get a chance to spread their wings. I can't help but feel for Laura, though, up in Prescott with a husband who so clearly doesn't want her or his own child she's carrying... will we get to hear more about how she's doing?
“Wasn’t so what? Ah ha! Now we get down to it. It ain’t me that finds Samuelson sexy, it’s you! Good thing she don’t wear no black leather cat suit huh?”
LOL! The truth comes out! Hmmm, let's see...
Tall - check
Slender - check
Long dark hair - check
Looks like Ellery has it all (and a lot more!!!) covered - he doesn't have anything to worry about! :laugh: And, it was great to see Wayne again, too! Thanks for another great story, Louise. Now that the girls are living near Jeremy and Nick, I hope we get to see a lot more of them................. *blatantly obvious hint* ;D
Marie
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