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louisev:
and here is chapter 10:  warts and all!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/259160.html

mariez:
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So, Louise, how many times am I going to be saying, "I didn't see that coming!" ?  Considering the fact that Edna spilled the beans in about five minutes regarding the ceremony, I'm not sure I'd be trusting her to keep a secret if I were Laura!  LOL!

But I do wonder how this is going to factor into things.  I had forgotten that Laura and Colson had a son that was stillborn.  :(   And I hope the twins were wrong in their speculations about Steve having an affair.....but that may be wishful thinking on my part.

Can't wait to see what this cast has in store for us next!

Thanks,
Marie

louisev:
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Did ANYBODY see that one coming?

muah hahahah, I love it when a plot actually surprises people.

louisev:
....and chapter 11!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/259343.html








but I am sure EVERYBODY knew this was coming!

mariez:

--- Quote from: louise van hine on March 09, 2008, 07:02:09 pm ---..but I am sure EVERYBODY knew this was coming!

--- End quote ---

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Ha!  Louise, you've made it so that we don't know what's coming or what's going! LOL!

Poor Ellery - I wouldn't want to take his blood pressure right now. And it's only 9:30 a.m.  But it's true that everything does seem to hit the fan at once in life. But it was nice to see Esteban is back and doing well.

And Laura's husband is quite the charmer, isn't he?   ::)  Ugh. 

Great stuff, Louise - thanks!
Marie

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