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New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls

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louisev:
I am glad to see I am keeping you loyal readers on your toes!!!

as always I love to read all the comments, keep em coming!

louisev:
and here is chapter 12!

 http://louisev.livejournal.com/259593.html

mariez:
SPOILERS




“Oh Daddy,” Katie Ann clung to him. “You don’t know how much we missed you bein down here. I am awful jealous a Ellery stealin you away.”

Colson laughed nervously. “Well as long as ya don’t play tug a war for me, Katie...

Hmmmm.... interesting choice of words on Katie Ann's part, and they didn't go unnoticed by Colson, of course. 


“Cause –“ Katie Ann interrupted. „Cause if she knows you are just as dead serious about Ellery as she was about marryin Steve she’ll finally give ya up an get over it, that’s how come.”

I know Laura has been pining for Colson, but somehow I didn't get the impression that she truly believed Colson was going to come back to her? Or maybe somewhere in her subconscious she held on to that hope?  I don't know...matters of the heart get pretty complicated - for everyone. 

Now hurry up, Colson - Ellery has to get to the jail!

Thanks, Louise!
Marie

louisev:
whoo wee, you don't miss a trick do you Marie?

I am running a little late tonight due to those ever-hard rice noodles in my stroganoff mix, and getting caught up in Obamomentum in the smashing Mississippi victory tonight.

louisev:
and here is chapter 13

http://louisev.livejournal.com/260022.html

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