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New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
louisev:
and now, more of our pair of pistols, and Daddy pistol as well!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/263352.html 'Chapter 24'
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on March 23, 2008, 07:07:02 pm ---and now, more of our pair of pistols, and Daddy pistol as well!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/263352.html 'Chapter 24'
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LOL! And Step-Daddy pistol, too!
SPOILERS
..."boy I’m glad I don’t got a wife no more sex.”
:laugh: Good one, Colson! I love when our boys act like a typical married couple - both a little out of sorts after a long day.
...Finally I got sick of it an gave her Paula’s number an said she can go bitch to my lawyer if she’s gonna bitch.”
Oh, this I want to hear!
“I think that Paula Samuelson’s got somethin for men in uniform if ya ask me,” Katie Ann said from behind Ellery.
Well, that's one thing I think we all saw coming ......Paula wouldn't appreciate that at all, Katie Ann (although Paula really must learn to keep her cards closer to the vest when it comes to her Ellery infatuation, as understandable as it is!).
So much to look forward to!
Thanks,
Marie
louisev:
yes unfortunately Paula isn't much of a poker player - she must have perked up just a little too much when the girls started talking about Ellery.
belbbmfan:
--- Quote from: mariez on March 24, 2008, 07:30:15 am ---
“I think that Paula Samuelson’s got somethin for men in uniform if ya ask me,” Katie Ann said from behind Ellery.
Well, that's one thing I think we all saw coming ......Paula wouldn't appreciate that at all, Katie Ann (although Paula really must learn to keep her cards closer to the vest when it comes to her Ellery infatuation, as understandable as it is!).
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You think so Katie Ann?? ;D. And Ellery's response had me thinking 'What? You really had no idea?' ???
And I agree, Paula forgot for a moment she was talking to her client and not to Kelly! I thought it was kinda unprofessional of Paula to make such a remard about their stepdad.
And Pam's and Katie Ann's remark about Ellery were disrespectful, in my opinion. They really shouldn't say things like that (even though they're all true of course!) to someone they just met five minutes ago.
Edna's going to have her hands full with these two! :)
mariez:
--- Quote from: belbbmfan on March 24, 2008, 12:08:01 pm ---And Pam's and Katie Ann's remark about Ellery were disrespectful, in my opinion. They really shouldn't say things like that (even though they're all true of course!) to someone they just met five minutes ago.
Edna's going to have her hands full with these two! :)
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Yep, I thought it was disrespectful, too - and immature. 20 is young - but it's not that young! These girls have a lot of growing up to do, for sure. I think Edna already has her hands full - no wonder she breathed a sigh of relief when Colson and Ellery arrived!
Marie
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