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frantic65:

Chapter 22 Spoilers




“You know that big study they did on sexuality with the sliding scale from 100% straight to 100% gay?”

“The Kinsey scale?”

“Yes that’s it. Believe me when I tell you Dreamboat Cantrell is all the way on the gay end. " *snort*


“I met his .. husband, too. Built like a brick shithouse as they say out here in the Wild West. Trains horses.” *double snort"

Let's bring Kelly to town-she sounds like a lot of fun. I was a little surprised at Paula's admission of fantasizing about Chief Deputy Dreamboat though.

You are on such a roll with this installment of the Greenlea Tales, Louise!

mariez:
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--- Quote from: frantic65 on March 22, 2008, 01:01:50 am ---...Let's bring Kelly to town-she sounds like a lot of fun...
--- End quote ---

Yes, let's!  Then Ellery can have two girlfriends - and both of them "girl lawyers," too! LOL!

You sure are on a roll, Louise - there wasn't one word in that conversation that didn't ring true.

...and the sheriff’s office up north didn’t care for my New York accent or the fact that the victim has a lawyer. I guess they thought they would discourage her from moving forward and it would go away.”

Yeah, the lineup thing was a bad sign.... >:(  - and a victim always has the right to private counsel!  The D.A.'s office in Prescott is making me more than a little uneasy....

Thanks,
Marie

louisev:
The genesis of Paula's 'real feelings' about Ellery can be found early in 'Dupree's Choice' when she places her first call to her confidant, Kelly.  Ellery caught her eye immediately, and later on, during the story 'The Chesterfield Fortune', she clashes with Ellery at the hospital and ends up bringing him home from the clinic with an episode of back pain, and that is the moment Colson becomes aware of some hidden feelings she may be harboring for him.

Nothing is ever easy in this town!

louisev:
better late than never...

"The Grey Girls:  Chapter 23":  http://louisev.livejournal.com/262977.html

mariez:
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“What a pair of pistols,” she said to herself, shaking her head.

LOL!  You can say that again! And why do I get the feeling that we ain't seen nothing yet? Thank goodness Ellery and Colson didn't hear that conversation!  Good grief.  Dreamboat Cantrell certainly has a powerful affect on women.....but I can't say I don't understand why.   ;D 

Thanks!
Marie

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