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New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on March 20, 2008, 12:51:49 pm ---I was rather proud of the "Pro what?" Ellery loses track when he starts using big legal words and doesn't realize that Colson's eyes start crossing about then!
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LOL! I liked that, too! Poor Colson's head still hadn't cleared from the "affidavits," "appearances," "preliminaries," and "arraigned" that Ellery threw at him! "Free" is much better!
Marie
belbbmfan:
I've said it before, but Pam couldn't be in better hands that with Wes and Edna. And now Paula is helping her too. It's great that this 'broadens' Pams circle of friends, even though it's under such terrible circumstances.
And maybe the truce between Ellery and Paula (I love how he just decides to call her that even though Paula just made it clear she was keeping her distance! LOL) can be of some inspiration between Colson and Laura?
I'm enjoying this story immensly Louise. And thank you for posting every single day! It's just amazing. :)
louisev:
okay folks, the next phase of the drama!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/262431.html Chapter 21!
mariez:
--- Quote from: louise van hine on March 20, 2008, 10:32:19 pm ---okay folks, the next phase of the drama!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/262431.html Chapter 21!
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SPOILERS
You weren't kidding about drama, Louise. Being back home only seems to have increased Laura's irrational (and, to be frank - repugnant) attitude. If she thinks Pam's ordeal is "ridiculous" (and if she still believes that Pam "asked for it") why does she want to "see her through it" at all? To view your own daughter's rape as nothing more than another way of "competing" with your ex-husband.....well, I don't even know what to say about that. I'm curious about what's been going on at her house since she's returned. I have to believe it's been pretty ugly.
“I wish yer friend Paula could a done it – she wouldn’t a argued with a D.A.”
Friend, huh? Well, Paula's status in the Cantrell/Grey household got elevated pretty quickly. LOL! And rightly so. I can see already that Paula's presence and counsel is going to be invaluable - and not just because of her legal skills. It can only be a good thing for Pam (and Katie Ann) to come in contact with an independent, intelligent and educated woman who knows she is the equal of any man.
And, yeah, after that conversation, poor Colson definitely needs some quality time with his husband to lower his blood pressure. :)
Wonderful, as always, Louise. Thanks!
Marie
louisev:
Amazing how much Paula has gone up in the estimation of Ellery and Colson, isn't it ?
heheh
And now... another kind of girl talk!
http://louisev.livejournal.com/262828.html Chapter 22
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