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New Greenlea Tale: The Grey Girls
louisev:
and here is chapter 19: http://louisev.livejournal.com/261793.html
mariez:
SPOILERS
You’ve seen how Colson gets when he ain’t around Ellery – I think he’s been lonesome without his girls.”
I think so, too - more than he realizes.
"And now it begins,” Wes said, pocketing the note and sitting back down wearily. “I don’t envy that girl one whit.”
I don't either. Poor Pam. It's a relief that Eldredge has been caught, of course - but experienced Sheriff Brown knows that Pam's nightmare is far from over. She has no idea what is ahead of her - and she's going to need all the support she can get.
Great story. Thanks!
Marie
louisev:
chapter 20: http://louisev.livejournal.com/262376.html
mariez:
SPOILERS
Did I just hear Ellery refer to Paula as "really nice"? Wonders never do cease! LOL! Paula's kind offer should cement their truce even further, and he's right that she really is the perfect person to advise Pam. Lineup? Bah!! And it would interesting, indeed, to see Paula and Laura interacting.....
I love how naturally you mingle the characters and the plot lines, Louise.....I'm sure we haven't heard the last from Jeremy and his issues on this, either....
Thanks,
Marie
louisev:
I was rather proud of the "Pro what?" Ellery loses track when he starts using big legal words and doesn't realize that Colson's eyes start crossing about then!
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