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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3050 on: September 11, 2007, 03:30:33 pm »





        Ennis's temper flared on the fourth



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3051 on: September 11, 2007, 04:52:44 pm »
Ennis's temper flared on the fourth
as he let angry fists form a pointed retort

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3052 on: September 11, 2007, 06:58:00 pm »
Ennis's temper flared on the fourth
as he let angry fists form a pointed retort.
Alma looked on in fear,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3053 on: September 11, 2007, 09:13:42 pm »
Ennis's temper flared on the fourth
as he let angry fists form a pointed retort.
Alma looked on in fear,
while the babies shed a tear


For how long? As long as we can ride it; ain't no reins on this one.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3054 on: September 12, 2007, 03:00:41 am »


Ennis's temper flared on the fourth
as he let angry fists form a pointed retort.
Alma looked on in fear,
while the babies shed a tear
and wild rockets gave the cannon report


       



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3055 on: September 13, 2007, 02:15:15 pm »
Ennis thought folks in town were suspicious


For how long? As long as we can ride it; ain't no reins on this one.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3056 on: September 14, 2007, 05:32:21 pm »
Ennis thought folks in town were suspicious
He feared some folks might get malicious


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3057 on: September 14, 2007, 09:07:30 pm »
Ennis thought folks in town were suspicious
He feared some folks might get malicious
He shared these feelings with Jack


For how long? As long as we can ride it; ain't no reins on this one.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3058 on: September 17, 2007, 03:53:24 pm »





Ennis thought folks in town were suspicious
He feared some folks might get malicious
He shared these feelings with Jack
Who  hoped someday he would crack



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3059 on: September 18, 2007, 12:49:32 am »
Ennis thought folks in town were suspicious
He feared some folks might get malicious
He shared these feelings with Jack
Who hoped someday he would crack
But those were delusional wishes.

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