Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3262447 times)

Offline Delmardeb

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3080 on: October 07, 2007, 03:31:33 pm »
The love for Brokeback is just awesome


For how long? As long as we can ride it; ain't no reins on this one.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3081 on: October 08, 2007, 07:59:56 pm »


 The love for Brokeback is just awesome
  It contained feelings we all watched blossom 



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3082 on: October 09, 2007, 06:36:40 am »
The love for Brokeback is just awesome
It contained feelings we all watched blossom
Out of it 'Bettermost' was born


For how long? As long as we can ride it; ain't no reins on this one.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3083 on: October 09, 2007, 01:06:37 pm »
The love for Brokeback is just awesome
It contained feelings we all watched blossom
Out of it 'Bettermost' was born
Where we laugh, love and mourn

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3084 on: October 09, 2007, 01:47:03 pm »



The love for Brokeback is just awesome
It contained feelings we all watched blossom
Out of it 'Bettermost' was born
Where we laugh, love and mourn
Its a comradarie without caution



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3085 on: October 09, 2007, 03:26:05 pm »
New one:  :)


Jack fell asleep with his boot in the fire,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3086 on: October 09, 2007, 03:48:12 pm »
Jack fell asleep with his boot in the fire,
Ennis crawled over with flaming desire
 
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3087 on: October 09, 2007, 05:22:24 pm »
Jack fell asleep with his boot in the fire,
Ennis crawled over with flaming desire
Hot lips on Jack's ear

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3088 on: October 09, 2007, 05:31:23 pm »
Jack fell asleep with his boot in the fire,
Ennis crawled over with flaming desire
Hot lips on Jack's ear,
Lust burning without fear


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3089 on: October 09, 2007, 05:53:21 pm »
Jack fell asleep with his boot in the fire,
Ennis crawled over with flaming desire
Hot lips on Jack's ear,
Lust burning without fear
For Jack's fine love made him perspire



More last line ideas:

Hot Jack-love he hoped to acquire
Ridding Jack of his cowboy attire
And hot man-love soon would transpire
And to the tent they would retire
Adoring his fine blue-clad squire
And hot love-flames burned ever higher
With Jack, he was quite the live wire
While owls and bugs formed a night choir
His hot love-gun would not misfire!

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