Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3278510 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3130 on: October 18, 2007, 03:16:00 pm »
The mountain was beautiful and fierce
and seemed really far from Alma Beers.
Up there he was free,
Invisible as the trees..
Alas, he came down with only sad tears..




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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3131 on: October 18, 2007, 09:31:45 pm »



        At first it was only at night inside the tent



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3132 on: October 18, 2007, 10:05:31 pm »
At first it was only at night inside the tent
Then outside of the tent Ennis and Jack went


For how long? As long as we can ride it; ain't no reins on this one.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3133 on: October 18, 2007, 10:34:04 pm »


At first it was only at night inside the tent
Then outside of the tent Ennis and Jack went
In the bright sunshine, and in the shade.






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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3134 on: October 19, 2007, 10:02:08 am »
At first it was only at night inside the tent
Then outside of the tent Ennis and Jack went
In the bright sunshine, and in the shade.
they horsed around and played


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3135 on: October 19, 2007, 11:39:29 am »
At first it was only at night inside the tent
Then outside of the tent Ennis and Jack went
In the bright sunshine, and in the shade.
they horsed around and played
Until they passed out jolly well spent!



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3136 on: October 19, 2007, 08:38:35 pm »
        Curiosity finally got the better of Jack!



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3137 on: October 20, 2007, 04:20:47 pm »
 Curiosity finally got the better of Jack!
"Is it good with a girl?" He got in the car's back...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3138 on: October 20, 2007, 08:01:07 pm »

Curiosity finally got the better of Jack!
"Is it good with a girl?" He got in the car's back...
He liked the direction she was going



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3139 on: October 21, 2007, 12:58:35 am »
Curiosity finally got the best of Jack!
"Is it good with a girl?" He got in thr car's back...
He liked the direction she was going
And before long Lureen was showing



For how long? As long as we can ride it; ain't no reins on this one.