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Author Topic: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll  (Read 4484244 times)

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #7550 on: November 25, 2006, 10:22:27 am »
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Nothing much I can add to what the others have said about the last few chapters.  You captured Dupree’s internal struggles, his hesitation and his guilt so brilliantly and convincingly.  Inasmuch as I love to read about Ennis and Ellery, these chapters about Dupree’s first sex experience with man just could not spare me a minute to think of them at all.  It’s not just about how hot and erotic the sex was, it’s more about how he began to face his feelings and the interactions between him and Nick that gripped my heart totally.  And I want to say I’m happy for Jeeves, I just hope Lance will prove to be worthy of Jeeves who I have grown to like a lot.



Here, here! I totally agree! I don't know how much more perfectly the picture of this whole encounter between Nick and Dupree (the better part of seven chapters too, whew!) could have been created in my mind. The constant mix of the physical, as well as mental details of the "experience" were perfectly described.

And as far as Jeeves is concerned, I too hope that he can be a more contented and happy person after the evenings events. I was concerned for him at first, and very happy to see him allowed the necessary "pleasures" in life. Lance better be good to him.  >:(


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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #7551 on: November 25, 2006, 10:29:01 am »
getting going a bit late here... typity typing chapter 108.
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #7552 on: November 25, 2006, 10:39:24 am »
Quote from: louisev on November 25, 2006, 10:29:01 am
getting going a bit late here... typity typing chapter 108.

Actually, Louise, I hope you are typing chapter 109...

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #7553 on: November 25, 2006, 10:45:25 am »
sigh... big numbers you know...
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“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #7554 on: November 25, 2006, 10:46:41 am »
Quote from: Lucise on November 23, 2006, 03:32:09 pm
A Brief Interlude to salute:

Beefy!Ennis and his pregnant mare ..   8)


Thanks Mill - that's one of my faves!
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #7555 on: November 25, 2006, 11:31:09 am »
I have to say I have a bit of partiality to Beefy!Ennis myself - something about those pillow-like pecs...
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“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #7556 on: November 25, 2006, 12:02:34 pm »
Update to "The Red Stallion"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/155327.html  "Chapter 109:  Wyoming vs. Dupree"
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“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #7557 on: November 25, 2006, 12:12:18 pm »
Quote from: souxi on November 25, 2006, 05:55:14 am
Mornin all, mornin twin. ;) ;D
Well that was some seriously HOT stuff I got to read first thing this morning Louise. :o :o :o :o
I agree with some of the comments on LJ about Janice. She is getting creepy..hanging around on street corners late at night in the dark waiting for Jeremy. Shes a weirdo, dont like her. >:( She,d better not turn out to be like Bunny either, or she,ll feel one of my bombs on her head. ;) ;) ;D

Afternoon sweet twin sista of mine  ;D  :-*  Afternoon all!

LOL!LOL! to bombing Janice!  ;D

Just read your pm  :(  was hoping to read "other" stuff if you know what I mean.... ;)  ;D  ;D
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #7558 on: November 25, 2006, 12:22:34 pm »
Morning, y'all!
Well, it's still morning here.    ;D
I have survived 'Turkey Day' and yesterday, I was up at 5 A.M. to go shopping.  We were home by 7:30.  It's the one day of the whole year I can get my DH into a store.   :laugh:

I agree, beefy!Ennis is yummy.  Of course, beefyJake and beefyHugh are positively drool-worthy!   :P  *slurp*

Loving these chapters about Dupree's first gay 'sexperience'!   ;)  The poor boy - so confused, such angst!

This entire saga has helped me to get over the tragedy that is BBM so much.  The end of the movie had me so depressed, it had triggered a mini-relapse of my PTSD symptoms for the past several months.  I should have known better, as I really don't handle sad stories well.

Thank goodness for Louise and the LS and fanfiction in general.  
Have an excellent weekend, y'all!
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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #7559 on: November 25, 2006, 12:23:36 pm »
Quote from: louisev on November 25, 2006, 12:02:34 pm
Update to "The Red Stallion"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/155327.html  "Chapter 109:  Wyoming vs. Dupree"

Woowee!!

Great to wake up and find a new chapter!   :D  Off to read!
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