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That Little Bit of Hope, Chapter 17 up!
mvansand76:
--- Quote from: littleguitar on October 17, 2006, 08:57:17 am ---Nope, though I had to double check because I used to have a pic of me on there and for a minute I forgot I took it down. That's actually Jake, looking ultra feminine.
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You must be kidding me! Aaargh there must be something wrong with me! I honestly did not see that, will have to check again..... :o
littleguitar:
LOL, here's a larger view...(I think this is the one you were talking about...)
Bigheart:
Ultra feminine indeed, but beautiful.......his lips are to die for.....*sigh*
littleguitar:
Oh I know! That's one of my favorite pics of him... his lips... I don't even have words ::)
mvansand76:
--- Quote from: littleguitar on October 18, 2006, 09:02:53 am ---Oh I know! That's one of my favorite pics of him... his lips... I don't even have words ::)
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Thanks for posting! I love how he looks in the production stills for Zodiac, he looks so 'guy next door' cute in those, but I do also like his looks in the pictures on the Shades thread... :)
I loved this chapter, very unexpected tenderness from Ennis, and again your dialogue was very good. I loved this:
Ennis pulled away slowly, his eyes still closed. “How much you drink?”
Jack sighed. It turned to a hiccup in his throat and he smiled wide, giggling. “A lot. A whole fuckin’ lot.”
Ennis’ face turned hard again and he opened his eyes. “Can see that, Jack.”
The dialogue is very natural and I hope you will follow up on that promise about John F*****' Twist! I also hope that Jack finds a way to stand up for not only his son, but also for himself, and not back down when his father beats down on him. That son of a *****. Ooops... sorry, getting carried away.... ;)
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