Amy - I can't thank you enough for this beautiful part of Chapter 12 (***Beware Spoilers***)
[color=blue]“Jack, I—it’s more than this for me,” Ennis said urgently, his lips almost touching Jack’s, desperate for Jack to hear beyond his words. He clutched Jack’s hip tightly, fingers sinking into his skin. “It’s more than just this.”
Jack stopped moving, pulling Ennis’s hand up to his mouth to kiss his knuckles, run his tongue along Ennis’s palm. “I know,” he whispered. The tears that Jack had been fighting back all morning were overflowing now, running down the sides of his face to form uneven pools on the dingy white sheets.
“Aaah, god, Jack,” Ennis exhaled, catching Jack’s tears in his hand. They made love silently except for their low moans, the sounds of their bodies joining together. Ennis thrust steady and strong, wanting to make it good for Jack, wanting him to feel loved. Jack came quietly, a deep trembling sigh, spilling over into Ennis’s hand. Ennis wasn’t far behind, his own tears wetting Jack’s collarbone as he fell forward, his body shaking against Jack’s warm skin.
Even through his grief, Jack offered what Ennis needed. He reached a gentle hand up to stroke Ennis’s hair, murmuring, “It’s all right, Ennis. It’s all right,” into his ear. And Ennis knew that deserving or not, he had been forgiven.[/color]
You have enriched my life with your beautiful writing, Amy. It is frightfully good! (the parts where I blubbed the most are in italics )
Especially the part I highlighted in red. I just loved that..... "catching Jack's tears in his hand". Can you imagine those big, blue eyes spilling over with tears. Oh, it breaks my heart to even think about it. Of course we caught a glimpse of it in BBM as Jack was driving to Mexico after being turned down by Ennis. But somehow, this scene in SoG even made me more sad. He caught Jack's tears in his hand.
Lord have mercy.
RouxB... sorry but I didn't answer part of your question. We will start gushing over the entire story soon. Right now, we are just generalizing. I think it's probably okay to comment on specific chapters as long as we post a **SPOILER** flag at the top of our posts. Truth is, we really don't have any rules here Ruby! We're just glad you're joining us. Jump on in here and tell us what you thought of the story!