Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County (ARCHIVE)

[Lumière]

ha, thought I forgot about ya!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/203785.html  "27. Delegating"

Excellent chap Louise!

Okay .. Wayne is hilarious ..
I can't believe Pookie almost told him what Simon did to him! LOL..
And another thing .. Every time Wayne is confronted for doing something wrong or banned from one thing or other .. he always resorts to the:  "I'm a sick man, I am dying.." line ..  .. and it works most of the time too!  Wayne certainly keeps things entertaining!   

[louisev]

Okay guys I think I have my reality sorted out.

I can do some editing/proofing early in the morning, then by the time i wake up and can think about the boys again I can write my chapter, which should be up about midday or so my time (wakeup time in America) and then go on to another chunk of my editing later.  I may be able to master the art of doing more than one chapter if I get used to it but right now it is taking a lot longer to sort out the character interactions in this story and to make sure that they mesh properly as we approach the climactic wedding reception with all ends tied up. Or all the ends that are fit to tie.

In chapter 28 there will be new faces at the bar.

[magicmountain]

Sex Machine

Ennis has had many names
like Mr Please and Thank You
To Ellery’s tease
he’s Mr Freeze
and then he’s Mr Spank You

Though boys may flirt and carry on
acting all lascivious
He doesn’t notice anything
(especially now he wears a ring!)
just boring Mr Oblivious

But come the nights
Mr Coyote bites
No more Mr Clean!
When Ennis Del Mar turns down the lights
he turns into the Sex Machine!

[louisev]

oh Jo, those little quip-poems always make me chuckle.  LOUDLY.

[Lumière]

heehee ..Sex Machine for real! 
Cheers Jo!

[mariez]

    Very clever - and very funny! 

Wouldn't you love to see Ennis's reaction to your poem?    

Thanks! 

Marie

[Bigheart]

Great stuff, Jo! As always 

[louisev]

Super bonus double length chapter. I hope it was worth the wait.

http://louisev.livejournal.com/204361.html  "28. Another Saturday Night and I Ain't Got Nobody"

[opinionista]

SPOILER!

He had bought new clothes at the urging of the D.A. for his testimony, and had sat through most of the morning, worrying the hat on his lap, answering the same questions by the public defender and interrupted by the raised hand of Paula Samuelson snapping “Objection, asked and answered,” followed by a soft yelp and a bit lip by Dawson and an aggravated sigh by the judge and the ever-fainter “Sustained,” and another scribbled note by Ellery on his notepad in large letters “GET THE FUCK DONE ASSHOLE” and stabbed the pad repeatedly, slowly and savagely.

LOL, this made me laugh hard. That is so Ellery. Oh and Wayne better watch his behind. It's Ellery's turn to spank him! LOL

[David]

My goodness!   What an action filled start to the night at the Red Stallion!