Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)

[moremojo]

Alma heard when he called out Jack's name,
Something special, something wasn't the same.
She wept quietly on her side of the bed,
With an anger that made her see red

[Lumière]

Alma heard when he called out Jack's name,
Something special, something wasn't the same.
She wept quietly on her side of the bed,
With an anger that made her see red.
She sobbed when Ennis cried out as he came.

 

[Katie77]

Alternative ending.....I was posting this line at the same time as you Lucise...

Alma heard when he called out Jack's name,
Something special, something wasn't the same.
She wept quietly on her side of the bed,
With an anger that made her see red.
She sobbed when Ennis cried out as he came.

 

I hope that she knew, that she wasnt to blame.....


lets continue......

Why did her man, love "Jack Nasty", that way,

[Lumière]

Why did her man, love "Jack Nasty", that way?
I aint too certain, but I gotta say:

[moremojo]

Why did her man, love "Jack Nasty", that way?
I aint too certain, but I gotta say:
If I'd been that gal

[Katie77]

Why did her man, love "Jack Nasty" that way,
I aint too certain, but I gotta say:
If I'd been that gal
I'd be sad and confused,

[moremojo]

Why did her man, love "Jack Nasty" that way,
I aint too certain, but I gotta say:
If I'd been that gal
I'd be sad and confused,
And sending that cowboy away.

May I start one? Here goes...

Wyoming was much too far to go

[Katie77]

start as many as you like "moremojo"....keep this thread going......


Wyoming was much too far to go
But at the end of the road, there was a glow,

[moremojo]

Wyoming was much too far to go
But at the end of the road, there was a glow,
It beckoned, it beamed,

[Katie77]

Wyoming was much too far to go,
But at the end of the road, there was a glow,
It beckoned, it beamed,
For the kisses that steamed,