Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3317271 times)

moremojo

  • Guest
Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1690 on: September 08, 2006, 07:57:21 pm »
Alma heard when he called out Jack's name,
Something special, something wasn't the same.
She wept quietly on her side of the bed,
With an anger that made her see red

Offline Lumière

  • BetterMost Supporter!
  • BetterMost 5000+ Posts Club
  • *****
  • Posts: 9,283
Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1691 on: September 08, 2006, 08:01:40 pm »
Alma heard when he called out Jack's name,
Something special, something wasn't the same.
She wept quietly on her side of the bed,
With an anger that made her see red.
She sobbed when Ennis cried out as he came.

  8)



Offline Katie77

  • BetterMost 5000+ Posts Club
  • *******
  • Posts: 7,998
  • Love is a force of Nature
Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1692 on: September 08, 2006, 08:07:39 pm »
Alternative ending.....I was posting this line at the same time as you Lucise...


Alma heard when he called out Jack's name,
Something special, something wasn't the same.
She wept quietly on her side of the bed,
With an anger that made her see red.
She sobbed when Ennis cried out as he came.

  8)



I hope that she knew, that she wasnt to blame.....


lets continue......

Why did her man, love "Jack Nasty", that way,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

Offline Lumière

  • BetterMost Supporter!
  • BetterMost 5000+ Posts Club
  • *****
  • Posts: 9,283
Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1693 on: September 08, 2006, 08:10:29 pm »
Why did her man, love "Jack Nasty", that way?
I aint too certain, but I gotta say:


moremojo

  • Guest
Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1694 on: September 08, 2006, 08:17:49 pm »
Why did her man, love "Jack Nasty", that way?
I aint too certain, but I gotta say:
If I'd been that gal

Offline Katie77

  • BetterMost 5000+ Posts Club
  • *******
  • Posts: 7,998
  • Love is a force of Nature
Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1695 on: September 08, 2006, 08:21:19 pm »
Why did her man, love "Jack Nasty" that way,
I aint too certain, but I gotta say:
If I'd been that gal
I'd be sad and confused,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

moremojo

  • Guest
Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1696 on: September 08, 2006, 08:26:24 pm »
Why did her man, love "Jack Nasty" that way,
I aint too certain, but I gotta say:
If I'd been that gal
I'd be sad and confused,
And sending that cowboy away.

May I start one? Here goes...

Wyoming was much too far to go

Offline Katie77

  • BetterMost 5000+ Posts Club
  • *******
  • Posts: 7,998
  • Love is a force of Nature
Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1697 on: September 08, 2006, 08:48:34 pm »
start as many as you like "moremojo"....keep this thread going......


Wyoming was much too far to go
But at the end of the road, there was a glow,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

moremojo

  • Guest
Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1698 on: September 08, 2006, 09:19:35 pm »
Wyoming was much too far to go
But at the end of the road, there was a glow,
It beckoned, it beamed,

Offline Katie77

  • BetterMost 5000+ Posts Club
  • *******
  • Posts: 7,998
  • Love is a force of Nature
Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1699 on: September 08, 2006, 10:18:41 pm »
Wyoming was much too far to go,
But at the end of the road, there was a glow,
It beckoned, it beamed,
For the kisses that steamed,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection