Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 2982035 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1820 on: September 26, 2006, 05:55:28 pm »
Dear Jack.....I miss you something awful,
Our love was so true, although unlawful,
I miss your smile, I miss your touch,
All I want is you, I miss you so much,
To share our love, this love so beautiful.


I Swear Jack, I Swear, if I had my time over,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1821 on: September 26, 2006, 06:34:35 pm »
I Swear Jack, I Swear, if I had my time over,
You'd be my one and only lover.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1822 on: September 26, 2006, 07:35:04 pm »
 I Swear Jack, I Swear, if I had my time over,
You'd be my one and only lover.
We'd cherish each moment, so tender and true,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1823 on: September 26, 2006, 07:47:36 pm »
I Swear Jack, I Swear if I had my time over,
You'd be my one and only lover,
We'd cherish each moment so tender and true,
I'd not be afraid, to say "I love you",
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1824 on: September 26, 2006, 07:58:33 pm »
I Swear Jack, I Swear if I had my time over,
You'd be my one and only lover,
We'd cherish each moment so tender and true,
I'd not be afraid, to say "I love you",
And near you I'd always hover.

A new one...

The sun set red on the mountain that night,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1825 on: September 26, 2006, 11:03:46 pm »
The sun set red on the mountain that night
When Jack softly whispered: "S'alright, s'alright!"

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1826 on: September 26, 2006, 11:11:24 pm »
The sun set red on the mountain that night
When Jack softly whispered: "S'alright, s'alright!".
His words did steady Ennis' pounding heart,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1827 on: September 27, 2006, 03:30:49 am »
The sun set red on the mountain that night,
When Jack softly whispered, "S'alright, S'alright",
His words did steady Ennis's pounding heart,
He knew he would never  want to part,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1828 on: September 27, 2006, 08:25:41 am »

The sun set red on the mountain that night,
When Jack softly whispered, "S'alright, S'alright",
His words did steady Ennis's pounding heart,
He knew he would never  want to part,
And for this man 'til death he would fight.

Gosh... lump in throat... *swallows hard*.

As Jack gazed at his sleeping lover's face
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1829 on: September 27, 2006, 02:36:13 pm »
As Jack gazed at his sleeping lover's face
He was overwhelmed by such beauty and grace

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