Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3407691 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1840 on: September 29, 2006, 05:44:16 pm »
Jack said "Ennis, get your arse in here",
"Its gettin' awful cold in this tent, my dear",
"And I know your body'll make it warm",
"Just thinkin' gives me a red hot horn"         (sorry, needed a rhyme)

Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1841 on: September 29, 2006, 05:49:45 pm »
Jack said "Ennis, get your arse in here",
"Its gettin' awful cold in this tent, my dear",
"And I know your body'll make it warm",
"Just thinkin' gives me a red hot horn"   
"And with me guiding you, you need not fear."

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1842 on: September 29, 2006, 07:10:01 pm »
The cuddled up, no thoughts of desire,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1843 on: September 29, 2006, 07:54:49 pm »
The cuddled up, no thoughts of desire,
Just cozy and warm lying next to the fire,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1844 on: September 29, 2006, 07:59:27 pm »
They cuddled up, no thoughts of desire,
Just cozy and warm lying next to the fire.
They relaxed in each other's arms.
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1845 on: September 29, 2006, 08:05:43 pm »
They cuddled up, no thoughts of desire,
Just cozy and warm lying next to the fire.
They relaxed in each other's arms.
Having no worries, freed of alarms,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1846 on: September 30, 2006, 03:58:44 pm »
They cuddled up, no thoughts of desire,
Just cozy and warm, lying next to the fire,
They relaxed in each others arms,
Having no worries, freed of alarms,
Together, they knew, they would never tire.


When Ennis felt Jack's hand on his most private parts,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1847 on: September 30, 2006, 05:06:26 pm »
When Ennis felt Jack's hand on his most private parts,
Little did he know they were two loving hearts

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1848 on: October 01, 2006, 07:37:52 pm »
When Ennis felt Jack's hand on his most private parts,
Little did he know they were two loving hearts
His heart raced, his arousal grew


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1849 on: October 02, 2006, 09:21:08 am »
When Ennis felt Jack's hand on his most private parts,
Little did he know they were two loving hearts
His heart raced, his arousal grew
His manhood strained for its goal so true