Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)

[Lumière]

Why's a man got such hatred inside him?
Does he fear something when looking at them?
Does he think it is wrong to love so deep?

[saucycobblers]

Why's a man got such hatred inside him?
Does he fear something when looking at them?
Does he think it is wrong to love so deep?
To make sweet love instead of tending sheep?

[Lumière]

Why's a man got such hatred inside him?
Does he fear something when looking at them?
Does he think it is wrong to love so deep?
To make sweet love instead of tending sheep?
Damn right! He must be callous or just plain dim!


Another:

'Brokeback is all we got, that I know

[jpwagoneer1964]

'Brokeback is all we got, that I know
Cant make August, and we got into a row

[Katie77]

Brokeback is all we got, that I know,
Cant make August, and we got into a row,
Jack said to me "I wish I could quit you",

[jpwagoneer1964]

Brokeback is all we got, that I know,
Cant make August, and we got into a row,
Jack said to me "I wish I could quit you",
Ah feel ta my knees, worst hurt Ah ever knew.

[Pipedream]

Brokeback is all we got, that I know,
Cant make August, and we got into a row,
Jack said to me "I wish I could quit you",
Ah fell ta my knees, worst hurt Ah ever knew.
And out burst those feelings I could never show...

 

[Katie77]

that last limerick, was one of the best.......



"Cant stand this no more" he said thru his tears,

[Lumière]

Since 2 limericks were started ... we can do both at once ..


"Cant stand this no more" he said thru his tears,
As he let out all the anguish of the years



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A lone cowboy arrives in Signal Wyoming,
Clouds in the sky and a cold wind blowing,
Then along came a lad from Lightnin Flat

[jpwagoneer1964]

Cant stand this no more" he said thru his tears,
As he let out all the anguish of the years
Jack’s gentle hand cradled his head
Ennis found comfort for the tears he shed

-----*-----*


A lone cowboy arrives in Signal Wyoming,
Clouds in the sky and a cold wind blowing,
Then along came a lad from Lightnin Flat
In a well-worn shirt and a fine black hat
Became so much more than wild oats sowing