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Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1870 on: October 06, 2006, 06:58:52 pm »
Why's a man got such hatred inside him?
Does he fear something when looking at them?
Does he think it is wrong to love so deep?


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1871 on: October 06, 2006, 08:08:54 pm »
Why's a man got such hatred inside him?
Does he fear something when looking at them?
Does he think it is wrong to love so deep?
To make sweet love instead of tending sheep?
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1872 on: October 07, 2006, 12:32:42 am »
Why's a man got such hatred inside him?
Does he fear something when looking at them?
Does he think it is wrong to love so deep?
To make sweet love instead of tending sheep?
Damn right! He must be callous or just plain dim!


Another:

'Brokeback is all we got, that I know




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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1873 on: October 07, 2006, 01:02:35 am »

'Brokeback is all we got, that I know
Cant make August, and we got into a row
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1874 on: October 07, 2006, 06:01:46 am »
Brokeback is all we got, that I know,
Cant make August, and we got into a row,
Jack said to me "I wish I could quit you",
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1875 on: October 07, 2006, 11:41:14 am »
Brokeback is all we got, that I know,
Cant make August, and we got into a row,
Jack said to me "I wish I could quit you",
Ah feel ta my knees, worst hurt Ah ever knew.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1876 on: October 07, 2006, 04:30:29 pm »
Brokeback is all we got, that I know,
Cant make August, and we got into a row,
Jack said to me "I wish I could quit you",
Ah fell ta my knees, worst hurt Ah ever knew.
And out burst those feelings I could never show...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1877 on: October 07, 2006, 05:09:58 pm »
that last limerick, was one of the best.......



"Cant stand this no more" he said thru his tears,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1878 on: October 07, 2006, 08:37:17 pm »
Since 2 limericks were started ... we can do both at once .. ;)


"Cant stand this no more" he said thru his tears,
As he let out all the anguish of the years



-----*-----*

A lone cowboy arrives in Signal Wyoming,
Clouds in the sky and a cold wind blowing,
Then along came a lad from Lightnin Flat
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1879 on: October 07, 2006, 09:19:50 pm »
Cant stand this no more" he said thru his tears,
As he let out all the anguish of the years
Jack’s gentle hand cradled his head
Ennis found comfort for the tears he shed

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A lone cowboy arrives in Signal Wyoming,
Clouds in the sky and a cold wind blowing,
Then along came a lad from Lightnin Flat
In a well-worn shirt and a fine black hat
Became so much more than wild oats sowing
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.