Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3181831 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1880 on: October 07, 2006, 09:22:17 pm »
Cant stand this no more" he said thru his tears,
As he let out all the anguish of the years
Jack’s gentle hand cradled his head
Ennis found comfort for the tears he shed
Although they could'nt save him from his fears ..


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1881 on: October 07, 2006, 09:23:15 pm »
Another:  :)


"If only I could tell you how I feel,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1882 on: October 07, 2006, 09:31:48 pm »
"If only I could tell you how I feel,
 Only when Ah'm here with ya is real
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1883 on: October 07, 2006, 09:44:35 pm »
"If only I could tell you how I feel,
 Only when Ah'm here with ya is real.
Being with you makes me high


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1884 on: October 07, 2006, 09:48:45 pm »
"If only I cfouold telkl y7ou how i feel,
Only when Ah'm here with you is real.
Being with you makrs me high--
There is no earth, there is no sky--
"We're each of us alone, to be sure. What can you do but hold your hand out in the dark?" --"Nine Lives," by Ursula K. Le Guin, from The Wind's Twelve Quarters

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1885 on: October 07, 2006, 10:07:40 pm »
One more then I'll let someone else start .. :P


Ennis hungrily scraped the beans from the can,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1886 on: October 07, 2006, 10:27:42 pm »
"If only I could tell you how I feel,
Only when Ah'm here with you is real.
Being with you makrs me high--
There is no earth, there is no sky--
This ain't no one shot deal
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1887 on: October 07, 2006, 10:31:26 pm »
Ennis hungrily scraped the beans from the can,
“That’s the kind o’ food puts heart in a man.”
On this mountain two hearts, two men were one
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1888 on: October 08, 2006, 11:26:45 am »
Ennis hungrily scraped the beans from the can,
“That’s the kind o’ food puts heart in a man.”
On this mountain two hearts, two men were one
Chased each other in the summer sun
Bodies warmed in the rays, skins became tan.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1889 on: October 08, 2006, 12:03:20 pm »
A new one!  :)

Whenever Jack gave Ennis that look