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Offline jpwagoneer1964

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1890 on: October 08, 2006, 12:14:09 pm »
Whenever Jack gave Ennis that look
Back at him a widening grin was all it took
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1891 on: October 08, 2006, 02:48:15 pm »
Whenever Jack gave Ennis that look
Back at him a widening grin was all it took,
To make Ennis' heart pound hard and fast


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1892 on: October 08, 2006, 04:27:37 pm »
Whenever Jack gave Ennis that look
Back at him a widening grin was all it took,
To make Ennis' heart pound hard and fast
Flesh to flesh with a yearning so vast
 
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Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1893 on: October 08, 2006, 11:40:55 pm »
Whenever Jack gave Ennis that look
Back at him a widening grin was all it took,
To make Ennis' heart pound hard and fast
Flesh to flesh with a yearning so vast,
He felt weak, exposed like an open book.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1894 on: October 09, 2006, 02:45:56 am »
Jack offered Ennis the bottle of whiskey,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1895 on: October 09, 2006, 03:10:13 am »
Jack offered Ennis the bottle of whiskey,
Warming his heart, Ennis felt less risky.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1896 on: October 09, 2006, 10:52:13 am »
Jack offered Ennis the bottle of whiskey,
Warming his heart, Ennis felt less risky.
The bottle was a prelude to other pleasures,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1897 on: October 09, 2006, 11:02:38 am »
ack offered Ennis the bottle of whiskey,
Warming his heart, Ennis felt less risky.
The bottle was a prelude to other pleasures,
To become as one beyond all measures
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1898 on: October 09, 2006, 11:54:31 am »
Jack offered Ennis the bottle of whiskey,
Warming his heart, Ennis felt less risky.
The bottle was a prelude to other pleasures,
To become as one beyond all measures
And to get there while being frisky!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1899 on: October 09, 2006, 02:33:28 pm »
In 1963 two cowbays began a journey
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.