Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3234298 times)

Offline jpwagoneer1964

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1910 on: October 11, 2006, 11:15:34 am »
Long before sunrise red and white Ford pickup comes to life.
An air of expectation, peaceful, no strife--
Childress, Texas in the rear view making it's way north
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1911 on: October 11, 2006, 12:21:17 pm »
Long before sunrise red and white Ford pickup comes to life.
An air of expectation, peaceful, no strife--
Childress, Texas in the rear view making it's way north
One man's restless heart wanting more, going forth,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1912 on: October 11, 2006, 12:32:09 pm »
Long before sunrise red and white Ford pickup comes to life.
An air of expectation, peaceful, no strife--
Childress, Texas in the rear view making it's way north
One man's restless heart wanting more, going forth,
Destination reached, Hearts, bodies embrace as one, veiwed by wife.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1913 on: October 11, 2006, 12:47:33 pm »
Ennis picked up the card stamped 'Deceased',
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1914 on: October 11, 2006, 12:51:25 pm »
Ennis picked up the card stamped 'Deceased',
In the blink of an eye, his world  had ceased
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1915 on: October 11, 2006, 12:55:06 pm »
Ennis picked up the card stamped 'Deceased',
In the blink of an eye, his world  had ceased.
He stood there, silent, knew not what to do.
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1916 on: October 11, 2006, 01:02:28 pm »
Ennis picked up the card stamped 'Deceased',
In the blink of an eye, his world  had ceased.
He stood there, silent, knew not what to do
How it had happened he had not a clue
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1917 on: October 11, 2006, 01:10:14 pm »
Ennis picked up the card stamped 'Deceased',
In the blink of an eye, his world  had ceased.
He stood there, silent, knew not what to do
How it had happened he had not a clue
Only with Jack had his heart been released.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1918 on: October 11, 2006, 01:47:33 pm »
The Newsomes were famous in their part of Texas

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1919 on: October 11, 2006, 08:02:56 pm »
The Newsomes were famous in their part of Texas,
As far as an income, they had well in excess,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection