Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3441187 times)

Offline jpwagoneer1964

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1950 on: October 17, 2006, 06:47:10 pm »
Anne and Michelle made their own contribution
Alma and Lureen gave Ennis and Jack convention
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1951 on: October 17, 2006, 06:54:42 pm »
Anne and Michelle made their own contribution
Alma and Lureen gave Ennis and Jack convention
And were lovely and true in their way

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1952 on: October 17, 2006, 06:57:17 pm »
Anne and Michelle made their own contribution,
Alma and Laureen gave Ennis and Jack convention,
And were lovely and true in their own way,
But there was never a way, these two boys could stay,


Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1953 on: October 17, 2006, 06:59:46 pm »
Anne and Michelle made their own contribution,
Alma and Laureen gave Ennis and Jack convention,
And were lovely and true in their own way,
But there was never a way, these two boys could stay,
Away from each other, in true hearts' fusion.

Shall I start another?...

Bears were the least of the mountain's dangers


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1954 on: October 17, 2006, 07:03:37 pm »
Bears were the least of the mountain's dangers,
Patrolling the mountain, were armed rangers


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1955 on: October 17, 2006, 07:05:47 pm »
Bears were the least of the mountain's dangers,
Patrolling the mountain, were armed rangers
Who could catch a couple of lads unawares

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1956 on: October 17, 2006, 07:14:05 pm »
Bears were the least of the mountain's dangers,
Patrolling the mountain, were armed rangers
Who could catch a couple of lads unawares
In each others arms in all their cares
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1957 on: October 17, 2006, 07:22:49 pm »
Bears were the least of the mountain's dangers,
Patrolling the mountain, were armed rangers
Who could catch a couple of lads unawares
In each others arms in all their cares
Rocking softly like little bairns in mangers.


Kinda lame but it is a hard one to rhyme ..  ;D


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1958 on: October 17, 2006, 07:28:53 pm »
Milli, you deserve extra points for using the word 'bairns'. I haven't come across that one since reading The Water Babies.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1959 on: October 17, 2006, 07:32:48 pm »
Milli, you deserve extra points for using the word 'bairns'. I haven't come across that one since reading The Water Babies.
I love Old English words!  ;)

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