Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3184127 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2050 on: October 31, 2006, 04:57:14 pm »
Ennis pulled off his belt, and lowered his jeans,
As a wind blew, quite smelling like beans..       (I think u are the nastiest)
He bent over Jack, and spat on his hand
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2051 on: October 31, 2006, 05:47:05 pm »
Ennis pulled off his belt, and lowered his jeans,
As a wind blew, quite smelling like beans..       
He bent over Jack, and spat on his hand -
Jack's attention and body he did demand!


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2052 on: October 31, 2006, 06:05:13 pm »
Ennis pulled off his belt, and lowered his jeans,
As a wind blew, quite smelling like beans..       
He bent over Jack, and spat on his hand -
Jack's attention and body he did demand
And that is what started, their beautiful dreams.
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2053 on: November 02, 2006, 02:05:45 am »
A new one!  :)

A big full moon lit the night sky

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2054 on: November 02, 2006, 02:35:18 am »
A big full moon lit the night sky
Jack looked down where Ennsi lie.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2055 on: November 02, 2006, 07:21:05 am »
A big full moon lit the night sky
Jack looked down where Ennsi lie.
The love he felt, like never before,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2056 on: November 02, 2006, 11:20:28 am »
A big full moon lit the night sky
Jack looked down where Ennsi lie.
The love he felt, like never before,
Gazing down to the fire wanting so much more
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2057 on: November 02, 2006, 11:23:50 am »
A big full moon lit the night sky
Jack looked down where Ennis lie.
The love he felt, like never before,
Gazing down to the fire wanting so much more
Ere to Childress or the folks he should hie.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2058 on: November 02, 2006, 04:43:14 pm »
"Get in here, Ennis, get out of the cold"
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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2059 on: November 02, 2006, 04:49:45 pm »
"Get in here, Ennis, get out of the cold"
Jack thought to himself, it's time to be bold.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.