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Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3234623 times)

Offline Luvlylittlewing

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6900 on: July 19, 2011, 09:16:10 pm »
Those first two guitar notes set Brokeback in motion
Brokeback - the subject of our devotion
Forever in our hearts,
And when Gustavo starts
We're bewitched by such a powerful potion!
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Offline Andrew

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6901 on: July 19, 2011, 09:39:19 pm »
I like it !   I bet you thought no one would EVER come up with that fourth line so you could finish it !   ;) 

I felt I had to refer back to the first line.  Especially since those two notes themselves are repeated in the score, after a timeless pause.
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6902 on: July 20, 2011, 01:47:06 am »
Quote from: Luvlylittlewing on July 19, 2011, 09:16:10 pm
Those first two guitar notes set Brokeback in motion
Brokeback - the subject of our devotion
Forever in our hearts,
And when Gustavo starts
We're bewitched by such a powerful potion!


Hey, that's a great limerick! One of our best ones, I think!   ;D
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Offline Luvlylittlewing

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6903 on: July 21, 2011, 12:53:41 am »
Quote from: Andrew on July 19, 2011, 09:39:19 pm
I like it !   I bet you thought no one would EVER come up with that fourth line so you could finish it !   ;) 

I felt I had to refer back to the first line.  Especially since those two notes themselves are repeated in the score, after a timeless pause.

Oh, I had no fear, as us Brokies are just clever that way.   :)  I had a few choices to finish it, but thought the one I posted is the best that I could come up with. 
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6904 on: July 21, 2011, 08:20:11 pm »
http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,49244.msg615667.html#msg615667

Paul was paging through Ebay. His eyes opened wide !
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Offline Luvlylittlewing

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6905 on: July 22, 2011, 01:28:42 am »
Paul was paging through Ebay. His eyes opened wide !
Certainly his eye for treasure is a source of pride!
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Offline SuperDistortion

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6906 on: July 22, 2011, 03:08:01 pm »
Paul was paging through Ebay. His eyes opened wide !
Certainly his eye for treasure is a source of pride!
Some elephants he thought
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6907 on: July 23, 2011, 02:13:34 pm »
Paul was paging through Ebay. His eyes opened wide !
Certainly his eye for treasure is a source of pride!
Some elephants he thought,
With PayPal, he bought,
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A companion where none had been expected...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6908 on: July 23, 2011, 04:13:09 pm »
Paul was paging through Ebay. His eyes opened wide !
Certainly his eye for treasure is a source of pride!
Some elephants he thought,
With PayPal, he bought,
"So many elephants, so little time" , he cried!
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6909 on: July 24, 2011, 12:34:10 am »
Quote from: SuperDistortion on July 23, 2011, 04:13:09 pm
Paul was paging through Ebay. His eyes opened wide !
Certainly his eye for treasure is a source of pride!
Some elephants he thought,
With PayPal, he bought,
"So many elephants, so little time" , he cried!

I love it!  And so true, I'm afraid...

Thanks, friends!  :-*
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